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The Most Fragrant Rose

I. In youth, she was a gift from the divine, Bringing happiness to those she would meet. Her complexion would radiantly shine To compliment her soft brown eyes so sweet. Her shining dark hair was always kept neat Whenever she went outside to have fun— The most fragrant rose grew beneath her feet. Quickly around the playground she would run, Then her young smile faded into the summer sun. II. In adolescence, she had grown defined, Who she was becoming began to show. Her youthful features became more refined, Walking gracefully through the leaves and snow. Over the months, the years would come and go— Mother Nature followed her to ensure The most fragrant rose continued to grow. Her beauty became increasingly pure, As her childhood face had proceeded to mature. III. In adulthood, a queen she is now crowned, As her elegance still lights up the room. A dearer woman can never be found, Search far and wide, it is safe to presume. These lines recall a hint of her perfume, And her beauty still shines bright throughout time— The most fragrant rose is now in full bloom. Here, she shall always remain in her prime, With her image forever captured in this rhyme. © 2021

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Date: 5/31/2021 2:32:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive comparative work. I enjoyed reading this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Thomas Koron
Date: 6/27/2021 7:10:00 PM
Thank you! Congratulations to you on your win as well!
Date: 5/29/2021 5:01:00 PM
A very fine poem, congratulations on your win my friend. God bless....
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Thomas Koron
Date: 6/27/2021 7:16:00 PM
Thank you! Congratulations to you on your win as well! God bless!
Date: 4/12/2021 8:49:00 PM
Thomas, you have captured moments in time, through the rose, so beautifully in your poem. Well done, my friend.
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Thomas Koron
Date: 6/27/2021 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much!
Date: 4/11/2021 12:21:00 PM
Beautifully written, Thomas! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Thomas Koron
Date: 6/27/2021 7:22:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Congratulations on your win too! And, blessings to you as well!
Date: 4/2/2021 1:03:00 PM
Very beautiful poem just like a rose!!
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Thomas Koron
Date: 6/27/2021 7:24:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 3/26/2021 12:23:00 PM
Hello Thomas Koron, So nice to meet you. A lovely poem about the rose. it is my fav. flower. I will make it my fav. I will enjoy reading more of your poetry. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Thomas Koron
Date: 6/27/2021 7:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene! I look forward to reading more of your work as well!

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