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The Morning Star

Annalise a.k.a. Audrey Haick Avatar Annalise a.k.a. Audrey Haick - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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The Morning Star

Look toward yonder Morning Star
And follow the staircase to your dreams
Love will find you where ‘ere you are
So cast your garlands in the streams
See them catch the golden sun beams

Gaze steadily upon its brilliant light
It calls us, 'come meet the glorious dawn'
It is the prize to keep in sight
As it is from light that pure love was born
And apart, the twain shall not be torn

This path is rugged; the journey long
At times we’ll stumble and look away
We’ll be accused of the same old song
Still, we must rise each time and be on our way
Light and love for us all shall never stray
~*~
12/14/2011
English Quintain Contest
*5th Place

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  1. Date: 1/7/2012 3:17:00 PM
    I'll bet Francine liked this write. This is her favorite form of poetry. You have written this one well.

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 8:54:00 PM
    great little verse came past my way, keep the words a flowing .. hey...

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 8:59:00 AM
    NICE I LIKE THIS

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 6:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super 5th place in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Annalise. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 2:56:00 AM
    congrats Annalise, loved this first time around, and it just keeps getting better. harry

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 12:24:00 AM
    'glad to see this one again, this time on the winner's list. Congratulations, my friend.

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 10:23:00 PM
    Nicely done and a great win. Love Joyce

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 9:12:00 PM
    congrats on your 5th place win Annalise with this lovely quintain

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 1:48:00 PM
    This is an "ahh" moment where I breath a sigh at such a beautiful poem. Very nice. This surely is a winner.

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 10:26:00 AM
    awesome contest entry, just love this. harry

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 8:46:00 PM
    What a nice English Quintain, Annalise. Long time, no see!!!

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 8:25:00 PM
    A good English Quintain, Annalise. In the first line of the second verse, just change "steady" to "steadily" for correct grammar purposes.

    Haick Avatar Annalise a.k.a. Audrey Haick
    Date: 12/14/2011 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading this and alerting me, Robert..correction made. ; ) Love, Annalise