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The Morning Is Calm

the morning is calm walking, I note cloudy sky and the cool breeze I hurry to cut the grass before the spring rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/21/2013 12:23:00 AM
hmmm, you have put up lots of Asian forms since June, so I think I will take a look at them. Again, I am no expert. I like this one. I got rejected in a tanka magazine, so I guess I don't know much about tanka. This actually seems to me like what that magazine would have liked because they were taking things related to the norm and I was trying to show them stuff that was more like out of the norm.
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