Get Your Premium Membership

The Moon Rains

To taste the moon, as it sings at night a generous portion of dark colored sun filled glass causes this somber sad depression fills this anguish of mine to melt.... Let me feel the moon in my bones behind this wounded heart of mine a ballad, oh moon, you do sing from the deepest part of my mind harbors the past of missed opportunities of events... The moon is raining my tears at night feeling the sadness of many a years bounds to my very soul to take the pain of the disturbed peace the world has gone mad my life is your equalizing song rain moon rain, with all your might... Debbie Brooks 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/13/2014 10:14:00 PM
Incredibly strong, strong wording, strong imagery, strong message. Very persuasive. Love it.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/12/2014 6:36:00 AM
Beautiful but sad, with a desperation even the moon shares.
Login to Reply
Dylan Avatar
Brooke Dylan
Date: 7/27/2014 8:09:00 PM
great to see you. sorry I havent been around. Brooke
Date: 6/15/2014 7:03:00 AM
So nice to see another great write by you my friend. So sad but so very good too!!!!
Login to Reply
Dylan Avatar
Brooke Dylan
Date: 7/27/2014 8:09:00 PM
Thank you Robert
Date: 6/13/2014 3:42:00 PM
Very nice write. I enjoyed it
Login to Reply
Dylan Avatar
Brooke Dylan
Date: 6/13/2014 4:09:00 PM
THANK YOU Susan
Date: 6/13/2014 1:20:00 PM
How beautifully crafted but sad Brooke..It is nice to see you/....hugs Tim
Login to Reply
Dylan Avatar
Brooke Dylan
Date: 6/13/2014 4:07:00 PM
HI TIM nice to see you too... hope you are well... hugs to you too

Book: Shattered Sighs