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The Moon and Rosered (Reposted)

THE MOON AND ROSERED (tanka) dew weeps not rosered heavy dew hangs not her cheeks no it is the light gone her lovely pastel blush gone the moon this cloudy night I accidentally zapped this one out because I don't know how to cancel those poems submitted in the last soup contest.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2011 9:03:00 PM

This is so pretty,Just revising way back in the oldies, my friend. About the snow poem being too short. It was Francine's contest and I had failed to read where she stated 2 -5 verses needed. I attached a new verse to the poem and I hope she likes it.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/8/2010 3:28:00 PM

enjoyed again, thanks for your comments.

Date: 3/5/2010 4:16:00 PM

Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. Glad you reposted it after zapping it so we could enjoy it again. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Have a nice weekend. Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/5/2010 6:01:00 AM

Don't take them out after the contest is done. I think its in the member area...under contest submissions..then look on the far right of that page and delete entry..if you must. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 9:36:00 PM

Well, I am glad I got to see it at least. They scroll off so quickly on the member board, dont' they? What contest was this one for?? LOve the last two lines of this one. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2010 9:57:00 AM

Very expressive short write. I can see the scene. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/4/2010 4:09:00 AM

Magical poem beautiful,Im glad my fingertips led me here..Charma(tnks for yuor kind comments)Charma

Skat A

Date: 3/3/2010 7:10:00 PM

NICE USE OF IMAGERY... BTW THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON ANTS... IT'S ALL RIGHT BY ME... I'M GLAD TO KNOW YOU ENJOYED IT I.T.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2010 3:16:00 PM

Beautiful image, Daver! I see many things when I look at a moon as full as it was last night. Keep looking for "the man" who is supposed to be there. Very good tanka! Tanka you, Daver. Love, Carolyn