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The Moon

The moon rises from her slumber With her she brings her children of the night The moon awakens the wolves for their hunt The owls screech from a distance Bats fly high in the skies Foxes scout the land for their latest stunt Mice scamper by trying to live in coexistence Spiders lie in wait of flies The moon awakens a brilliant danger

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/24/2015 7:20:00 AM
Sara, this poem is awesome :) have a nice day ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/22/2015 8:51:00 AM
Your poem uses unusual and imaginative imagery and subject matter to make a statement and is clever in its use. Emile.
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Date: 1/21/2015 10:00:00 PM
Really good poem Sara. I always think that the moon lends itself to poetry. I am going onto your poem "Sun" next, can't wait. Love Shane xxx
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Date: 1/21/2015 9:04:00 PM
Thank you both so much! This is the one I was most nervous to submit so I'm glad you like it.
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Date: 1/21/2015 8:52:00 PM
Oh! The moon and the mysteries underneath it.
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