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The Moon

Moon Big, orange Rising, glowing, forecasting Preparing for Autumn's harvest Recurring, enticing, enthralling Amazing, reflective Satellite

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Grace Eunsong Lee

Date: 6/29/2010 3:21:00 AM

Awesome take, Virginia. This is just how I see the moon. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. Have a great day :) -Grace

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2010 9:53:00 PM

A cool form of poetry. Very nice, Virginia. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/26/2010 3:25:00 PM

Earth's satellite moon is so grand in the fall when it appears so large and orange, Virginia. I really like the way you employ the diamante form with all the "ing" words. Very melodic and certainly a brilliant image. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/26/2010 3:24:00 PM

Well, one that mistook the moon for a satellite..Haaaaaa! Thanks for the kind comments..Sara