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The Mood 1/2

The Mood 1/2 I want to adore you, O, Mood today Without you, we find it difficult to write any thing Even it is difficult to dream or imagine anything Without You O Mood, We neither can appreciate the beauty of a blooming Rose Nor we can enjoy its enchanting fragrance Without You O Mood, It is difficult to enjoy and feel, even a heart touching melody Flowing like a breeze, in the air all around us Without You O Mood, We even can not feel the beauty in its alluring form When women open its charms and want to take every thing in arms Without You O Mood We can not be enthralled to dance in the season of spring When others feeling its charms, are singing joyous songs Without You O Mood, We can not feel young, even after drinking nectar To enjoy the blessings of youth and to replay the Evergreen tree Song Ravindra to be concluded in 2/2 Kanpur India. 7th April 2010

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Date: 5/18/2010 1:34:00 PM
A mood is so lovely to me when its not extreme. Thank you for bringing Mood to animated life so eloquently. I appreciate mine more today-- Grateful for the simple beauty of the breeze. Susan
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Date: 5/5/2010 9:13:00 PM
INTERESTING ONE, most enjoyed. You have such a way with your write. Perfectly written, and well posted. With a read so interesting. Ravindra, thank you for your kind comment,,IRMA
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Date: 4/15/2010 7:32:00 PM
Mood is very necessary when creating a write ... I look for atmosphere.. that is what I write as my inspiration from people, from luv, from children, from life ... anxious for part 2 of Mood...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/7/2010 4:05:00 PM
Once again...this is truly beautiful Ravindra. I cannot wait to read the conclusion...wonderful poetry! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/7/2010 11:56:00 AM
The repetition works well to make your point in this poem. What a creative perspective. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/7/2010 10:16:00 AM
Your "mood" allows you to feel everything good that life has to offer, Ravindra. You give us wonderful images and the form of this poem is quite creative. Hope you are doing well, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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