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The Monster Part 2

now we struggle; against each other trying to gain control, to gain dominance over the other. My brain hurts. I'm loosing, He's gaining, and I'm weakening. I'm afraid. If he wins there's no telling what he will do or who he will hurt. I can't let him win; he could hurt my family, he could hurt John or Jim, but most of all he could hurt Jazzy. Jazmine. I must fight for those i love, I must fight so i don't release even on my most hated and greatest enemy. He must not win, and i must fight on. i have finished part 3 and i even wrote a part 4 to end the series i decided i didn't like part 4 so i'm going back to try it again i will post part 3 when i have the chance

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Date: 5/1/2013 5:55:00 AM
very nice... is there gonna be a part 3?
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Jordan Miller
Date: 5/1/2013 8:03:00 AM
yes i have already finished it along with a four and i will post them very soon
Date: 4/28/2013 12:20:00 PM
Interesting write. Enjoyed the read.
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Jordan Miller
Date: 4/28/2013 1:07:00 PM
did you read the first part 1 it will be more understanding. but thank you

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