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The Monster Cries

Diamonds glistening until your blinded Infects the willing and unwilling Those who hide, smile. those who don’t, cry It’s still there even for those who give freely Concealed inside this fantasy So deeply hidden, this knowledge forbidden The diamond in your hand The monster cries Breathing a dark reality, Dreams shattered, pieces scattered, Its journey jagged, the diamond scratched The monster walks among us lost, and hurt It looks for comfort and fails Several times This kingdom Overwhelmed with hate, vengeance and crimes It retreats back into it cave to seek solace from its familiarity But it also betrays the monster and the monster howls searching for security The diamond in its hand A little drop of blood lands softly on to the tip of the diamond The drop widens like ripples in a pond Tips and overflows the stone Dripping into the cracks The diamond in its hand Seeking affiliation, singing alone It’s never safe and it knows The diamond bleeds and the monster cries The Monster Cries

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/17/2008 12:36:00 PM
Hello Sharmin... beautiful writing, the imagery is magnetic .... "This kingdom Overwhelmed with hate, vengeance and crimes It retreats back into it cave to seek solace from its familiarity But it also betrays the monster and the monster howls searching for security The diamond in its hand" BRAVO !
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Date: 7/9/2008 3:04:00 PM
Thannkk youu charles! I might need a bit of help making my way around the site but thanks for your comments everyone, please let me no if there needs to be improvements.
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Date: 7/9/2008 2:34:00 PM
By the way...welcome to the Soup!!! I really look forward to more of your poetry. My best, Charlie
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Date: 7/9/2008 9:05:00 AM
Great imagination...Brava...Sara
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Date: 7/9/2008 8:35:00 AM
Some monsters seem different in new light. You have shined it beautifully. AN interesting poem. Well done. My best, Charlie
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Date: 7/9/2008 8:15:00 AM
I reckon monsters cry to - interesting poetic story
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