The Moment of Truth: Burning Or Refining

As exemplary as a High Priest and consecrated as a Temple's Inner Chamber. Respected amongst his colleagues, reverenced by His subordinates, distinguished, honorable and set apart. Then came the moment of Truth like the refining fire which may burn or may purify. A Golden Opportunity never to be seen again, but a situation to break or to make him. This is Crude Diamond Ore from a glance already anticipating to do it at once creating an allabi with occurrence in France and covering all traces in utmost Brilliance Not minding his activated self-repugnance certainly it will give birth to wealth and public acceptance. If Life gave him more options, he'd freelance. But with this one opportunity, he'd like to dance. Having no qualms; even if he disappoints his fans. He isn't to be blamed if Life is not a balance and success among all has no concomittance. This is the start to his enjoyment galore but can be forever hunted by the Law. The heaped pressure pressing more and more, but what the Hell! It's just one flaw. With a blessing so raw, attached with bountiful Harvest he never saw. Thinking of his glory and celebration and already holding his blessing like a woman in lactation yet a part of him suppresses his whole in castigation making him feel so useless like a man facing castration forcefully taking his freedom and peace in extortion Just about to make the decisive move, he resisted the push and forgot about the groove having in mind, something to prove he signed the blank cheque without adding another "0"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 6/11/2012 8:06:00 AM
You are so talented, original and a delight to read. If Life gave him more options, he'd freelance. Thank you for the good reading. love, Kathy
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/11/2012 10:13:00 AM
Thanks Kathryn.........
Date: 6/6/2012 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Robert A for your kind words
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Date: 6/6/2012 7:36:00 AM
Funom Makama ( love that name) what an outstanding write. I had to read it over again before I understood it after reading the last line. Masterfully done and out of the ordinary. I am impressed. Thank you for your kind comment.
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot Anne Lise Andresen
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Date: 6/4/2012 3:37:00 PM
Woow . . . you are a brilliant poet Funom ! - Well done!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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