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The Moment (So Few Ever Find)

Tonight was real and also a dream I was standing by a mountain stream The mountain peaks covered with snow Absorbed the moonlight and seemed to glow The sky was clear and the stars were bright On this cool and crispy winters night From behind the trees you did appear This is why I hold this dream so dear Suddenly time just froze in place As the moonlight illuminated your face You moved with such grace and ease As though you were one with the breeze As you came closer and our eyes did meet My love struck heart found a brand new beat You placed my hands around your waist Then offered your lips for me to taste The only music was that of our souls As we started to dance soft and slow Some things in life are just meant to be As I gave my all to you, you gave your all to me It was magical how everything just felt so right As our bodies steamed in the frosty night There was no thinking ahead or looking behind For we found the moment so few ever find

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Barretta Freeman

Date: 10/19/2008 11:40:00 AM

Now this is "LOVE". Beautifully put. Someone once use to feel this way about me. Though he couldn't express it the way your heart has allowed you to write it. It would've been nice if he could've read this. Wonderfully written, so romantic and loving. You are blessed with a beautiful heart. Keep expressing it, it helps others. Including myself. Thanks MJ!

Janice Herzog

Date: 9/27/2008 12:46:00 PM

Dear Michael: This is very romanctic. Nice to know some men are still true romantics. Thanks for reading my poem. It's just that he lives 25 miles from me, and I only see him about 2 times a week, for now. I'm missing him as soon as he leaves me. Much Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

Gladys Ingram

Date: 9/20/2008 10:23:00 AM

I really enjoyed this poem. I really took in the last part; "there was no thinking ahead or looking behind, for we found the moment so few ever find". That was beautiful. Gladys Marie

Deneen White

Date: 9/13/2008 12:44:00 PM

so few do find this, so if this is what anyone has, try with all your might and soul to keep it, passion hope love and oneness in this romantic write, take care D-nyce

Janice Herzog

Date: 9/13/2008 10:48:00 AM

Dear Michael: This poem shoould be in the love category. I think it is beautiful. Thank-you for reading my poem. Try Destiny, my first and my best one. Much Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 9/12/2008 11:05:00 PM

It was really a fantastic write with beautiful imagery and even more beautiful message (in the last lines). Regards Chitra

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/12/2008 6:28:00 PM

Ooo...steaming on a frost night - wowza! Hot stuff, Michael! Loved this love-filled couplet! Love Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/12/2008 2:33:00 PM

Oooh, dreamy and steamy and so magical. Enchanting imagery in every way. You painted a beautiful picture here of true love's connection. Soooo nice. Love, Shar

James Foulk

Date: 9/12/2008 1:44:00 PM

Oh man Michael this sounds so peaceful and Gentle. Living here where I can see mountains with snow on them as I type this now, I can see relate to your beautiful poem.

Heidie Buys

Date: 9/12/2008 9:03:00 AM

So very well written and so very mesmerizing. You sure know how to touch the heartstrings. Well done. Regards Heidie

Linda Rutherford

Date: 9/11/2008 7:17:00 PM

A beautifully written poem, full of emotion and love. Romantic and huanting. I loved it...Linda

Christy Hardy

Date: 9/11/2008 4:56:00 PM

So beautiful, with such flow, I was captured by every line. Love to you, and your beautiful family, Always, Christy

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/11/2008 4:41:00 PM

Lovely and romantic poem, Michael~ Right from a poet's heart!..~ Blessings...Carrie