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The Mocking Bird Sat

. The Mocking Bird Sat Quizzically looking in... Broken drained bird bath (My bird bath is broken..The Mocking Bird sat on the rim looking at me in the kitchen like he was asking me what is wrong here.)

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 4/5/2011 3:52:00 PM

O those birds don't miss a trick, Sara. I could picture it looking at you through the window, asking "what is wrong here." Gotta love those birds! Hope all's going well with you and yours. God's blessings to you all! Mikki

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/31/2011 6:10:00 AM

yep they notice those things

Dana Smith

Date: 3/30/2011 2:11:00 PM

beautiful:) take care of yourself. Dana'lynn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/30/2011 4:30:00 AM

thankxx Sara for your S.M. on this piece ... appreciate the explanation my friend.. still a lovely sight to view .. hopefully Spring will arrive and stay for a while .. hope u are enjoying blessed health and wonderful week..luv.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2011 3:08:00 PM

What a cool image, Sara. I can just see the mocking bird searching for the water in the bird bath and looking at you in dismay. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/29/2011 3:02:00 PM

So appreciate your lovely comments Sara my friend.. getting to my S.M. shortly .. in between cooking for my entire family tonight luv..

James Foulk

Date: 3/29/2011 2:59:00 PM

i love poems about mocking birds and this was a great one. thank you for your comments on my poetry.

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/29/2011 12:01:00 PM

Really like this piece, Sara, enjoyed the read today. Thanks for the comments on Raccoon Went A Wooing...and happy you got some chuckles from it! Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/28/2011 1:34:00 PM

Quite sentimental but very cool and humorous, Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/28/2011 1:24:00 PM

sara, this 'ku sends me reeling with its natural flow and sentimental coo.. love it.. hope you're good! :) huggs, nette

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 3/28/2011 1:04:00 PM

simple. short and sweet

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2011 12:48:00 PM

A sweet picture u presented Sara .. our birds are totally confused with our awful weather pattern.. we have bird houses all over and it is so cold I don't believe I even hear them singing so much ... they get used to us doing for them and I can just see the mockingbird staring at u with this questioning look on his face luv... hope it gets fixed soon..