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The Missing Me

With shadows in the dark, Facing atrocities of the cold, Yet drenched in the sweat, I walk down the street Am bound to follow what others passed by, Crime it is as if else I try, Tears follow the path of my cheek, And it’s the only way my eyes speak, Lips of mine when turn dry. I smile I really try to, To be happy as if I was made to, I speak of something I don’t know But there’s what my heart knows, That’s what my eyes ponder, And that’s what untold but true, Yes I know, Yes I do, I am missing me in me, Yes I know, Yes I do, I am missing being me……….

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Date: 6/28/2019 1:26:00 AM
This feels sad. I hope you find YOU! Thanks for your comment at my poem.
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Date: 6/27/2019 8:57:00 PM
Belated welcome to PoetrySoup, Shiraz.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:47:00 AM
Shiraz, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:59:00 PM
Hi SHiraz, this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3
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Date: 6/28/2013 11:56:00 AM
This is a gem of a poem, I especially like the second stanza!
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Date: 6/26/2013 4:50:00 PM
Hi Shiraz, missing you and a few other new friends on the soup... but that is not why I am here... , CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for enjoying my contest...I had much fun in closing my contest called ... ""A weeks into my poem"".... contest- Take care and enjoy my blog if you want... have yourself a lovely day.... LINDA
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:34:00 PM
I love your poem..congratulations
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:50:00 AM
Shiraz, this is a great poem and it is so sad and I felt it deeply too. It is like one just trying to fit in and not really belonging yet wanting. With the way you write I am sure you belong any where you go. I hope you are happy and find what you are looking for my friend.
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/24/2013 1:07:00 PM
You are just wow Debbie thank you for reading.Even your comments are unique and true keep coming
Date: 6/24/2013 4:07:00 AM
amazing piece..gud goin dude..
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Date: 6/24/2013 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Parivartana.
Date: 6/24/2013 12:35:00 AM
Arr congrats my friend :) a winning poem indeed :)
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/24/2013 1:03:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/23/2013 10:56:00 AM
your entry is most inspiring. Your win is well deserved.... Congratulations.....Jake
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/23/2013 11:17:00 AM
thanks a lot sir :)
Date: 6/22/2013 11:29:00 PM
Great write Shiraz, well done......Seren
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/23/2013 6:57:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words
Date: 6/22/2013 9:57:00 PM
Shiraz, .your poem is perfect for my contest. Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/23/2013 6:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat :)
Date: 6/22/2013 5:09:00 PM
That is an amazing poem. I really love it!! congrats on your win!!!
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/23/2013 6:16:00 AM
Oh! thank you .Feels good to be appreciated am going through your works
Date: 6/22/2013 3:54:00 AM
First of all congratulations on your win. I have told earlier about your expressions, just beautiful and concentrated. This poem is one of its kind. I felt every word of it...this poem is priceless.
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Date: 6/22/2013 4:56:00 AM
Congos for your win too sir.thanks a lot for your kind words
Date: 6/20/2013 3:26:00 PM
Shiraz congratulations on your excellent win. I look forward in reading more of your poems. Welcome to PS. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/21/2013 5:15:00 AM
Oh thanks a lot Connie ...........am reading your works now
Date: 6/20/2013 1:38:00 PM
Shiraz ;-) Congratulations!!! Thank you for entering one of my latest contest. please enjoy all the other winners who took their time in entering the same contest you did. you can find the list on the -Contest Winners: Member area- or you can visit my newest blog called ""from HEART to HEART ..."" stop by if you like. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 6/21/2013 5:17:00 AM
Thanks a lot Linda never thought i would make it........ feels gud to be appreciated
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Date: 6/21/2013 5:17:00 AM
Thanks a lot Linda never thought i would make it........ feels gud to be appreciated
Date: 6/18/2013 1:07:00 PM
Very good poem here Shiraz.I love this.
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/19/2013 12:00:00 AM
Thanks a lot for dropping by Kash these words mean a lot to me ...............
Date: 6/18/2013 10:18:00 AM
I like your poem Shiraz, a perfect 7. very sincere I have a contest under the same topic of your poem. I hope you make it, before the contest is filled. *luv ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 6/18/2013 10:34:00 AM
Thanks for being generous Skat .Perfect 7 wow! Am looking forward to the contest
Date: 6/18/2013 1:03:00 AM
Well, this is awesome ;} glad you liked She Waits ;} Welcome to poetrysoup ;}
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/18/2013 1:10:00 AM
Thank you :) Glad that you dropped by to read this
Date: 6/17/2013 12:39:00 PM
soup mail...
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Date: 6/17/2013 12:34:00 PM
Hi Shiraz, wow,, thank you for taking your time in visiting my poems today. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I have a contest in which is perfect for any poem. Please consider my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side** hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/17/2013 12:59:00 PM
Thank you for the warm reception..........I would love to participate in the contest looking forward to it
Date: 6/17/2013 3:41:00 AM
I think sometimes we loose ourselves along the way but if we dig deep we can always find who we really are.Welcome to poetrysoup and hope you d keep writing-Charma
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/17/2013 12:57:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome Charma Yeah that's the real story we lose ourselves and this leads to loss of confidence..........
Date: 6/16/2013 2:13:00 PM
Very well written indeed
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/17/2013 12:54:00 PM
thanx a lot words from people like you means a lot
Date: 6/16/2013 8:00:00 AM
Well written my friend! Welcome to poetry soup!! - Edward
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/16/2013 8:10:00 AM
thanx bro!
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