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The Mind

The mind of a 18 year old there are many thing that goes in an out this mind only God and me knows its hard for me to tell other but in my mind Ithink that t hey dont need to know anyway there is alot of things I want to do in life i want to be amodel and i would like to get married one day but I dont want kids at all in my mind I 'm in love with my boyfrend but others may not think so but who cares about what they think its about me and him I dont want to go into any more details so I will end this by saying these are the words that are in the mind

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Date: 3/6/2010 1:27:00 PM
Nice piece Alyssa >> James
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Date: 3/6/2010 12:34:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Alyssa. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/5/2010 4:15:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight... very nice..luv.."Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/5/2010 12:51:00 PM
What you feel is the only thing that matters, Alyssa. Who cares if others believe you are in love. You know what's in your heart! Enjoyed reading your work today. Best wishes, Carolyn
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