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The Mimosa Approach

A chilled but passionate solution Bubbly mix with bracing sensation Dashes of bittersweet fruit in flute Sends forth your day in joyous pursuit An inward touch of coy affection Close to perfect prime of your generation Afar I lay on your sinuous path As frivolous lace of vast green swath

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2014 7:50:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Piyo - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 12/1/2014 9:36:00 PM

Piyo, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Piyo Ross
Date: 12/2/2014 8:26:00 AM

Hi SKAT Thank you for the sweet welcome and well wishes. Tis ever summer Singapore here Just the average girl with overflowing emotions here I see that u have numerous works. Splendid! Good to know u and hope to know u more :)