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Author's Notes: "The Might Have Been," is a Heroic Couplet I wrote and set in Iambic Pentameter.  I wrote this poem as a consideration of paths or events followed or taken where some other option "might have been" better. I thought the grammatical figment or notion of "might have been" was an ideal topic, in this sense, for a heroic couplet to express and explore this particular anomaly. The essence of my write turns on situations where people sometimes end up very disappointed with a decision or a course of action they've taken where some other alternative "might have been" the right one. Looking at things later in hindsight usually gives one a fuller perspective and further information on an event or issue at hand that did not exist when the original decision was made. Hence, the "might have been" scenario often plays out in these "hindsight moments." Something here to think about. (Gary Bateman - July 6, 2015) (Heroic Couplet)   

Categories: allegory, change, destiny, journey, metaphor, time, and wisdom.

Technical Characteristics of this Heroic Couplet:

Meter: Iambic Pentameter

Syllables per Verse: 10

Total Syllable Count: 140

Structure: Seven Couplets / 14 Verses

Rhyme Pattern:  aa|bb|cc|dd|ee|ff|gg

Word Count: 100

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The Might Have Been Illusion so bespeaks the might have been, Which passes not for real, done, and when. A grammar notion meant for a moment; Descriptive too of a heartfelt lament. Imagination swims in might have been; A world of fantasy until time when. Emotions so thought and not yet expressed— Now cannot cancel such moments depressed. Stating what you thought—but it happened not; Meaning might have been is all you have got. The might-have-been pervades such actions past, And no forgiveness for mistakes made fast. An event that never was scares one true, When the real event makes one so blue! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (July 6, 2015) (Heroic Couplet)

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Date: 7/9/2015 2:13:00 AM
Gary, might have beens happen when nobody cares to take the leap or the risk! I never tried a Heroic Couplet before but I like how you made this one!!! 3rd, 5th are my faves!!! like the intensity that comes as one goes on to read!!! ~Olive Eloisa =")
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Gary Bateman
Date: 7/10/2015 1:44:00 PM
Hello Olive Eloisa!! Glad you like this write. I write my Heroic Couplets to be 7 couplets in length or the same length total (14 verses) just like a Shakespearean Sonnet. Unlike a rhymed and unrhymed couplets (which I write a lot of), the heroic couplet is set in Iambic Pentameter (IP), and is always rhymed. Because of these constrictions many people shy away from writing them since the IP requirement forces one to really choose their words very wisely, etc. But the end result (my opinion), is a couplet write that is quite powerful, and at 14 verses can have an effect similar to what one sees with a Shakespearean Sonnet. I wrote 4 HC's for my first book (also posted on PS). The first three were entitled: The Past, The Present, and The Future. (These were a trilogy-type write.) The other one is Zephyr's Magic. You can use mine as an example, if you wish, when you go to write one. The effort is intense, but the result is magnificent!! Cheers, Gary
Date: 7/6/2015 4:19:00 PM
Gary, oh the what if's in life, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, muse
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Gary Bateman
Date: 7/6/2015 4:26:00 PM
BW, Thanks too here for your visit to my poem on "The Might Have Been." Grammatical conceit is that underlying vehicle whereby we all express ourselves. The conditional mood is very much reflective of the doubts and what if's that pervade our lives. And, I thought your Muse poem was quite wonderful indeed!! Best Always, Gary

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