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The Midnight

. Dark and preserved the midnight with all of its radiance the Stars and the fullness of the rotund the Moon Oh how our arms wrapped with unyielding while our lips betrothed in anticipation of that bright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/6/2011 6:44:00 PM
Imagine lips being betrothed. Lovely thought and I don't mind if I do. :)
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:55:00 PM
passion with a capital P... lovely,james! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/20/2011 7:15:00 AM
James, this is the nicest romance under the midnight sky-I think I feel a shower of stars in the distance too! This is sooooo nice! Best to you! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/20/2011 5:32:00 AM
soup mail James.. complete .. let me know luv..
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Date: 5/19/2011 7:58:00 PM
very nice good job with the flow. cory
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:50:00 AM
a very romantic and tender piece of fine poetry.
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Date: 5/19/2011 1:41:00 AM
Mr. Romance is in the Soup Building ;) love it James, hope yourself and Noah are doing okay.. love Wilma
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Date: 5/18/2011 2:22:00 PM
Yes, the Moon hath charm to create many moods and situations. Just the thought of a full moon doth make of a man quite horny sometimes. Have been away for a few days - damn computer broke down and had to buy a new one. LOve, daver
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:43:00 AM
soup mail James.. ready set go..luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 12:21:00 AM
Bright romance!! Good one, James.
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Date: 5/17/2011 9:04:00 PM
soup mail James.. packing to fly back home tomorrow evening.. will work on project... airborne luv..
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:43:00 PM
Thank you for you kind comments, James. Wish we could talk. Need some prayers tomorrow. Hope you and Noah are doing well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:13:00 PM
Ahh....the romance just ooozes from this beauty, James!! Wonderful !!
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:01:00 PM
Great romantic and passionate work..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:53:00 AM
I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your outstanding poetry this morning James. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 2:21:00 PM
Well I am in awe and anticipation James.. such beauty in these expressive lines..I can hardly wait for our.......soup mail luv...
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Date: 5/16/2011 1:30:00 PM
There is something about the full moon that brings out the romantic nature in many of us, James. (For others it brings out their animal nature -- Hooowl) Beautiful images of the night sky and that magic moment, dear James. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/16/2011 12:49:00 PM
lips betrothed... nice image with passionate feelings, James
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