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The Midas Touch

i belive in the touch i belive in the feel i belive in you so thank you very much i believe in nothing cant possibly be there but if you can see it have belief in the where what i touch is old all that glistens is gold but if your touch is real have belief what you feel can you see the clock in front of your face it isnt really there have belief in your faith try find the touch its in there somewhere try find the faith as long as you care the happiness you seek one day you shall find and leave all the gold five miles behind your arms very strong but your minds very weak if you get lost your faith you should seek the heaven you cry for will always belive the person inside you shall always recieve theres nothing like money theres nothing like pain but if you belive me its all in the brain

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Date: 9/15/2016 11:07:00 PM
Neil,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/13/2016 4:01:00 PM
Neil K., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/9/2016 2:45:00 PM
Hello Neil as I was reading your poem I felt like your poetry was talking to me. I sense that your poem is spiritual.You did a good job on your poetry.
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Neil Kerr
Date: 9/9/2016 3:16:00 PM
wow thank you so much, its much appreciated

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