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The Mermaid's Kiss

I stared into the depths of bluest sea, Into the eyes of beauty’s sweetest pearl, And fell in love as she hypnotised me. Beneath the waves her gold locks heave and swirl, The flowing of her hair entranced my mind, A sailor lost to a beautiful girl. Her sirenic song told of love to find, The music carried passion’s tidal surge, How could I know her love was the worst kind? Within her kiss I felt my soul diverge, And dragged me down so I can ne’er be free, My lifeless body left for seas to purge. I stared into the depth of bluest sea, And fell in love as she hypnotised me. Form: Terza Rima Sonnet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/28/2012 9:22:00 AM
Smile ˜ My first image was lovely Daryl Hannah in the movie titled Mermaid ˜ But she was a precious love and light-filled Creation * My second thought unto this wonderfully crafted verse my dear friend, was that of a Pslams notes ˜ "If I were to ascend to the furthest galaxy, or descend into the deepest ocean, still, 'YOUR BEAUTY,' would find myself there." ˜ My love to You, John!:) ˜
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 4/28/2012 3:33:00 PM
Thank you John.
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Date: 4/28/2012 9:24:00 AM
....Smile, Psalms, not slams ˜

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