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The Medicine Man

THE MEDICINE MAN When I was a girl, We lived way out back, In the swamplands where life, Was hard but no lack, Of love and good humor, And inventive fun, We were tired but happy, When day was done. One evening my uncles, Were chasing me, In a game of tag, Near a big Oak tree. I couldn't see, The tree in the dark, So I hit it full bore, And there made my mark. I was down for the count, Out like a light, They took me to Grandpa, Who, seeing my plight, Set to work right away, To bring me around. He reset my nose, Made sure I was sound. My face was a horror, A regular mask, But with his tender care, I was soon the same lass. He made poultice, used herbs, To take down the swelling, Relieving my pain, And discomfort quelling. He was quiet and gentle, And didn't say much, But he knew a lot, And he had the touch. He doctored our family, He doctored our friends, And many an animal, He came to tend. He was just an old Indian, But I never forgot, The things that he did, Proved he knew a lot. He lived his life quiet, The best that he could, And he did his best, To live like he should. He never stole, Wasn't given to drink, Said too much booze, Made it too hard to think. Didn't hold much store, In money or fame, But he knew the importance, Of a good family name. What others think, He said with a grin, Depends much on you, So try not to sin. He taught by example, And he taught us a lot, And the things that he taught us, I never forgot. Judy Ball For Tell Me A Story Contest by Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 11/17/2016 6:52:00 PM
Just cruising around the site and came upon your poem here....such a neat poem and I enjoyed every word you wrote...I appreciate those that are not difficult to read and tell a story...yours certainly does......
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Date: 1/9/2012 11:05:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, my friend. Loved and enjoyed your nice one. bl
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/10/2012 3:30:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/9/2012 9:30:00 PM
hey, you won again with this one. CONGRATS, sweetie. I finally read the comment you had made to me down here from a while back. It's great that you learned what is important in life. I know alot of people say it, but I too have Cherokee blood (just a lot more watered down. haha) and I too am cute (except for my long nose in profile!)
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Date: 1/10/2012 3:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea. It's a fave. And your nose doesn't look so big to me. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/9/2012 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations on you win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Judy. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/9/2012 6:28:00 PM
Thanks so much Carol. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/8/2012 10:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Judy. Haven't heard from you in a while. Glad to see you back.
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:25:00 PM
CONGRATS JUDY ON A WONDERFUL WIN FOR THIS DYNAMIC STORY MY FRIEND.. THANKXX FOR WARM WORDS OF COMFORT TOO..
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/8/2012 9:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda-Marie. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/3/2011 11:36:00 AM
A wonderful tribute and lovely thoughts! Sharon.
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/3/2011 11:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Sharon. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/2/2011 10:50:00 AM
Many congratulations, Judy : )
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Jack. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/2/2011 1:54:00 AM
Ah yes the picture flows, and with her nose, she learns of other things, natures helper surely knows, how to fix a little shiela... great work and placing meant to be:) great work here. xo, Don
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/2/2011 6:09:00 AM
Thanks bunches Don. You should have seen my face. Two black eyes, broken nose and my lip split. Today you would never know it happened. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/2/2011 1:05:00 AM
oh wow, judy...heaps of congrats on your amazing award!! :) huggs!
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/2/2011 1:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Nette. Gld you like it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 11:25:00 PM
how interesting to know you have this background, Judy. what tribe was he? And was the marsh part of a reservation? Or did he just live out there by his lonesome with your grandma? A NEAT win, jUdy. congratulations.
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Date: 8/1/2011 11:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. My mom is Cherokee, my dad is Sicilian, me, I'm very, very cute. When my parents separated Mom took me to live with her parents so we lost a lot of "things" but gained other more important things which I think is better. We lived just outside the Seminole Reserve near the Okephenokee Swamp. Thanks bunches. Glad you liked this. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 10:11:00 PM
Avery loving tribute to your grandpa. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Joyce. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 9:41:00 PM
Judy congrats on your 1st place win in Carol's contest. Enjoyed this poem tremendously. Love, Glenna
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/1/2011 10:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Glenna, Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 8:51:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of carol,judy
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/1/2011 10:41:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 8:30:00 PM
A beautiful tribute, Judy... I have goosebumps!
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/1/2011 10:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Nancy. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 6:18:00 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/1/2011 10:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Caryl. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 5:55:00 PM
Good memories of your grandpa.Many Congrats on your first place win.
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/1/2011 11:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 4:33:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS for this great wonderful win~~~~smile~~~*-*junjun
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/1/2011 11:23:00 PM
Thanks tou so much Junjun. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 4:22:00 PM
Beautiful poem for a beautiful man, Judy. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN, Lainie
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/1/2011 11:25:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my latest contest Judy. It was very hard choosing the placements as I loved them all. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 11:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/1/2011 2:44:00 PM
Congrats Judy on your first place win my friend with this delightful and dynamic poetry ...luv..
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/1/2011 11:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda-Marie. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 6/28/2011 8:38:00 PM
Great ol fella , great verse too, amongst us are the caring ones , sometimes not, overun with bums. Ive doctored horses dogs n humans, stitched their hides, myself as well, Interesting story babe, done very well. xo, Don
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Judy Ball
Date: 6/28/2011 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Don. It's great of you to stop by with those kinds words. God Bless, JB

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