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The Meadow

THE MEADOW Spread Neath umbilical sky On nutrient Earth She stands alone this noon Surrounding woods Mountains Distant structures Seem to encase the lush green plot Have taken on a sunny sheen Then there is this peaceful babbling brook running through sparkling wetly whispering GOD! What an ecstatic vision! But wait! Come Lie down on fairy moment’s colorful hay Smell the wild flowers Hum a happy tune Then Listen! Oh! Below! A wild bacchanal defames all empyrean image Slither-slide – Bunnies mice POP! Bees dragonflies Winged squadrons buzzing BANZAI! A billion glassy eyes of every size Looking for kill Or pre-empting demise Shiny black bugs on nature’s green rug Distant The sound a staccato wheeze A high wire din Like one hundred tortured violins Then rise Return to that simpler view Smile in wonder That nothing in nature is static And wonder what’s going on inside of you? Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/25/2016 7:44:00 PM
Love this poem. Will be back to read it several more times, let your genius effect me. A Big Fav!
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Date: 8/12/2016 9:16:00 AM
Write to feed and satisfy every sense; a true beauty, Daver:). Strong introduction "...On nutrient Earth She stands alone this noon", feels like an opening to your own powerful opus. Reminds me of "Pierre et le loup"...what does it leave inside? Wonder, and appreciation. Hugs and love to you! Mikki
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Date: 8/10/2016 6:44:00 AM
Amazing one.... Beautifully done....
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Date: 8/7/2016 5:13:00 PM
You zoom in for a very close view and then back out to the simple view of nature. Awesome verse, my friend. Delightful!
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Date: 8/5/2016 4:09:00 PM
This is Awesome Dave, in fact i have experienced every word of this poem, you took me back with your wonderful words.
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Daver Austin
Date: 8/6/2016 11:49:00 AM
Thanks, Harry. I'm a nut for trying to show the other side of an image or landscape. Love, daver
Date: 8/4/2016 2:20:00 PM
Mysteriously done--- I was intrigued by your poetry!
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Daver Austin
Date: 8/5/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thanks for the visit. Let's see what you have written. Love, daver

Book: Shattered Sighs