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The May Queen

As I lie between the blades of green grass; with a wave of your hand, you took me there. a smile in your eyes, sunshine in your hair. I'm climbing high through the mountain crevasse seeing stars so bright, like crystalline glass on a dream carpet we fly through the air. As the full moon rises, I touch your hand; you stare off into the dark azure sky. Tears began to fall as you start to cry; the carpet then fell to earth and did land; we toppled to the beach on the warm sand; you slowly turned away saying goodbye. Sunrise rose over the tropical scene; I wish to again dream of the May Queen.
3/5/2021 HexSonnetta Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Date: 4/5/2021 5:44:00 AM
Your thoughts are quite lovely, Ken. Well written for a contest win.
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 4/13/2021 3:31:00 PM
Hi Jenna, thanks so much for your kind and most generous comment. My Best, Ken
Date: 4/5/2021 5:44:00 AM
lovely imagery Ken, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 4/13/2021 3:31:00 PM
Hello Jan, thanks for the lovely comment! Hugs, Ken xx
Date: 4/4/2021 3:47:00 PM
Enjoyed your dream, Ken, nicely penned. Congrats on your win. John
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 4/13/2021 3:30:00 PM
Thank you John, so sorry for the late reply but I've been editing my new poetry collection. I appreciate your kind comment!
Date: 4/4/2021 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations Ken! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, this was a challenging form, but your poem caught my attention, well done my friend, Emile.
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 4/4/2021 2:40:00 PM
Emile, Thank you so very much for finding my poem worthy of a winning spot in your recent contest. Many thanks!
Date: 3/5/2021 12:44:00 PM
Delicate and pretty; a powerful contender for this contest.
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 3/5/2021 12:56:00 PM
Why thank you so very much Caren; I truly appreciate you reading and sending such a lovely comment!! Ken

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