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Inspired to write by the Contest conducted on me " Dr.Ram's words are more than gold

Compliments, success and various honors I earned Are like matchsticks leading me the next stage on By lighting my path to settle down in corporate life. But do I stand to all the above compliments & honor? Or Do they say the truth earnestly or for some "return" As they lay more responsibilities and duties yet Do they set a situation to confine oneself in show-case? Here’s the crux; ignored the truth after combustions. Have learnt a lesson, if flame goes off, light a new. There’re safety matches, friction and noiseless one Needing suitable surface or specially prepared surface. Well, an unstruck match won’t show up in pitch dark Unless lighted up with external source with a surface. ================================== 3rd Place win Contest: New Poem Compliments by Frank H. Dr. Ram Mehta 9-25-13 I am inspired to write this poem by a contest on me " Dr. Ram's words are better than gold" sponsored by Joe Maverick sometime in November, 2011

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Date: 10/9/2013 10:45:00 AM
Dr Ram. Congratulations on your deserved winning poem. Perfectly complimented by your pen. Have a nice day. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 10/8/2013 7:07:00 AM
Very nice..congratulations
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Date: 10/7/2013 5:52:00 PM
well penned ! Great win !
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Date: 10/7/2013 1:05:00 PM
congrats on your win Dr. Mehta
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Date: 10/7/2013 12:47:00 PM
congrats Ram ...Seren
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Date: 9/29/2013 3:20:00 PM
A very thought provoking poem full of wisdom. Best wishes Linda x
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Date: 9/26/2013 2:50:00 PM
In re your kind visit as thought in com, my dear friend ~ Most probably they do not not needing a body to regenerate itself ? Besides, their possibly far too busy being gods, Smile ? II Corinthians Chapter 10, Tis somewhat what this makes myself consider ? Along with much else perhaps ~ Keep striking those matches my friend and have a wonderful day also, thank you for the visit ~ Love, John
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Date: 9/26/2013 9:42:00 AM
Friction to find a beautiful truth wonderfully worded. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/26/2013 8:37:00 AM
enjoyed your poem of internal reflection, Warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 9/26/2013 6:36:00 AM
An unsurpassed metaphor the matches image is! After all success is a ladder that helps us reach our goal the question is what we do after reaching it! A wonderful lesson of life your poem is that could be appreciated more by those who have been through the same experience! Excellent work!
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Date: 9/26/2013 5:37:00 AM
the unstruck match, does darkness bring,, the unfair world's a bitching thing, the unloosed demon meets his match, so poor the former rich do sing... when logic don't smoke the hash, yes lassie, per alas, i'm thinking, its just a logic swing... Don re: Dr Ram "The Matchsticks" ...
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Date: 9/25/2013 4:31:00 PM
a nice self reflecting poem, Dr. Ram.
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