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The Masterpiece

If we were the things we loved, then... I would be the shine in puppies eyes Or a cuddled kitten's purr, I would be a great novel or poem Or, the smell of grandmother's house. I would be the autumn sun upon my face And the smell of springtime blossoms too, I would be an infants cackling laughter And, his mother's ample breast. I would be the passion in a rutting Buck And the pining of the whippoorwill's call, Or the chipmunk that dashes across my yard And, the morning hawk that catches him! I would be the scent before an evening shower And the distant rumble of a storm, Or a sea shore on a morning's walk And, a painted evening prairie sky. I would be a swirling murmur of starlings And the evening chant of tree frogs, I would be the smell of my mother's cooking And, the sound of my children's laughter. If we were the things we loved Then I would be all of these, and more But I'm not, instead I'm just me They're the brushstrokes of the masterpiece... And I, but the eager canvas. Timothy I. Brumley

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Date: 3/28/2017 7:15:00 AM
I really enjoy the "matter of fact" way you write. Your poetry, at least what I have read so far, is every day, it is the normal, the things we see but don't absorb, the initials carved in a sidewalk that to some are merely vandalism but to the artful eye, something beautiful and lasting. Bravo, another great piece of writing and definitely a masterpiece.
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Timothy Brumley
Date: 3/28/2017 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Chris :) A great writer once said that a writer should write what he knows which is what I try to do.
Date: 3/28/2017 6:54:00 AM
And on your canvas you painted for us delightful pictures that shine in our mind's eye. An enthusiastic 7:) Amitiés
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Timothy Brumley
Date: 3/28/2017 7:07:00 AM
Thanks Anne, 7 is good but read on my peruserby, read on.

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