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The Mask of Sorrow

I am sitting in a corner of a dark, empty room. Asking myself what went wrong... We were just happy crossing the street last year.. Holding hands of one another until we partways. Why must this love has to end? Was it me who you have to blame? I've loved you with all my soul and breath.. I even surrendered with your embrace. My world turned only for you, I almost forgot to breathe when you go. Why am I alone in this room? Drowning in tears that you've caused. Should I end up and stop trying.. and lose myself in a bottle of drinks. Or lift my head to face the world... Wears up the mask of sorrow I fraud.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/2/2014 10:51:00 AM
face the world. lovely write.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/2/2014 11:25:00 AM
thanks for your visit, JoLO!! :)
Date: 12/25/2013 10:08:00 PM
A Sad but beautiful love poem! I hope your future will be filled with only smiles!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/26/2013 9:39:00 AM
Thanks, Arthur...may your wish will come true.. :')
Date: 12/25/2013 11:30:00 AM
My Dear Aiyah, It is so difficult, sometimes impossible, for love to comprehend loss so it relents to lonely! You write on my heart girl!! chuck
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/26/2013 9:38:00 AM
indeed, Chuck..thank you for reminding me of these realities..!! thanks for the visit :')
Date: 12/25/2013 11:00:00 AM
Im sorry for the pain you carry, try to move on and let God and time heal your heart. This was a very well written expression of the pain of heatbreak, blessings to you and Merry Christmas
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/26/2013 9:40:00 AM
Carl...you are such a man of good heart!. Thank you so much..! ^___^
Date: 12/24/2013 11:04:00 PM
Some people change our life completely.. But we have to be strong enough not to change ourselves.. piece of heart presented in poem..
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/26/2013 9:41:00 AM
Yup ,Benup! ..thanks for your comment! .. :")
Date: 12/24/2013 3:30:00 PM
A heartfelt verse indeed. The best thing we can do for ourselves is move on
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/24/2013 3:36:00 PM
thank you for the compliment...you were ryte..move on and live again :))
Date: 12/24/2013 3:27:00 PM
deep heartfelt beautifully penned piece
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/24/2013 3:36:00 PM
thanks for your comment and visit my friend :)
Date: 12/24/2013 1:07:00 PM
Hi, A heartfelt write..Thanks for visiting my verse.. regards, Ken
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/24/2013 2:48:00 PM
thank you too, KEN :)

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