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Trilogy 1) Alice and Vincent 2) The Mask The one in black Dapper, sinister with a sharpened string harp Melodies to defeat the bravest of souls Can’t go back Slithering down the rabbit hole Out of control You would never know Tossing smiles Knifes slice up pink hearts Stay away, stay away Stay away from me Stay away From the stranger Avoid the danger The dandelions always come back The bourbon flows behind the mask Let the rabbit crawl Out of the hole Look in his eyes You will see no soul My eyes are filled with empty gods Given up on all you lot Let the devil have his way Let the darkness make me sway Haven’t got a bullet to end it all I just know I have been the fool The lost one behind the mask I am not up to the final task Weep on the floor Sweep me away In my three piece suit You have no idea The demons who play Screams and laughter Screams and pain Musical insolence Piano keys dance in my head I don’t want you to leave me I don’t want you to know me Go away I am the one in the mask Softy they cry out my name Ste.......phen Ste.......phen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/24/2015 8:51:00 PM
oh, I REALLY like this. You have a great finesse with imagery! Some parts of it are a bit deep for me! (over my head. haha) anyway, the tone is sad and very human. Glad I finally came to see it! NOw my hubbie will be wanting dinner!!! I better get offline!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2015 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Andrea , it is a bit disjointed on purpose, anyone who knows the life and music of Alice Cooper would get this more, even I sure took some poetic license here! :)
Date: 8/24/2015 7:54:00 AM
Oooh this was terrific, I was following every line, getting inside the character, I completely felt this...it gave me chills along my arms, every line....Wow...just perfectly said.!
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Date: 9/4/2015 8:50:00 PM
Wow, how much do I owe you!!!!! thanks Cas!!! hugs
Date: 8/23/2015 8:43:00 PM
The imagery throughout is deep and sad Arthur - I think we ALL wear a mask to protect us from issues in life:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2015 8:49:00 PM
Thanks Jan! We think as ONE ! LOL
Date: 8/23/2015 8:27:00 PM
Sad heartfelt poem with confusion and despair dark and deep , good write a 7 .hugs Eve
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2015 8:49:00 PM
Thank you Eve, hope all is well with you!
Date: 8/22/2015 9:23:00 PM
, very good, Alice could have used this in Welcome to my Nightmare, you got a good imagination!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2015 8:48:00 PM
Thanks Billy

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