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The Marriage One Spring

The Marriage One Spring Carriage was white and horses dapple-gray. Dreamy, like a fairytale, true love that day. Sparkling eyes lit up the dressing room Hidden away from the guests and bridegroom. Time had arrived; music began to play. The Wedding March.” rang on that special day, Strikingly posh was the most gorgeous gown. Gleaming with love the bride slowly walked down. The bridegroom, smiling, would make vows for life There at the church, the bride became his wife. Lovers together kissed wearing their rings. Then, rode to forever, love, one warm spring. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 27, 2010

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Date: 2/20/2010 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations on another win, Dane Ann....Beautiful write. ....Jimmy
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Date: 2/18/2010 9:20:00 AM
"Belated Congratulations" on this beautifully written poem Dane! Sincere, Agape, Mose
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:21:00 AM
This is the moment of ending celibacy and sharing life with somebody. I can feel the warmth words here as we enjoy the spring time. Congratulations on your win, Dane Ann. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 2/13/2010 3:48:00 AM
Dane Ann, Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem of how every woman would love her wedding to go. Beautiful! Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/9/2010 6:05:00 AM
hot poem!!
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Date: 2/8/2010 1:49:00 PM
Dear Dane Ann, my congratulations on your win the contest! I missed this one also! Don't even know why! Splendid! Hope you're doing well. My SM doesn't work so just know that I think about you sometimes! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:10:00 PM
My Dear Dane Ann, Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in Mac McGovern's Contest "Anything Goes" This Brings back Memories of My Everlasting Day Although Lenore and I did not "Ride to Forever" Together YOU deserve a Wreath of Laurel FOR this Fasinating Write LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/4/2010 1:09:00 AM
Can't help but picture this lovely day in my mind :) A beautiful poem about a beautiful love story, it reads like a fairy tale and a dream, just lovely :) congrats on your win with this, Dane Ann :)
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Date: 2/2/2010 1:05:00 PM
A lovely picture created, exactly as stated in the title! A big congrats to you, Dane Ann, on winning in MAc's first contest! lUv,Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2010 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Dane Ann. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/1/2010 9:04:00 PM
A lovely poem, Dane Ann, filled with the joy and hope newlyweds have in their hearts. Congratulations on your win in Mac's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/1/2010 7:59:00 PM
What uplifting poem of new love and its capacity to last. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Anything Goes contest. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:46:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in Mac's Anything Goes contest.. well deserved win for an excellent write.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. thankxxx so very much for your precious comments on my poetry today... u are a dear blessed friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:25:00 AM
Bonnie pictures of many many brides on their special day Dane Ann, gorgeous piece >> James
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Date: 1/28/2010 12:50:00 AM
Pretty pictures Dane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.I understand ,here in England it is made from the flower like the home-made wine of the same name
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:23:00 PM
sounds like the perfect wedding.Hope you had a great day today.I posted a new poem.
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:52:00 PM
Lovely ,its like a fairytale dream with a happy ending,beautiful,can picture this warm spring scene..Charma
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