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The Mark of Cain

first man borne of earthly woman wakeful n'fresh as the morning dew the heavens fell he, was false as hell over which he was meant to rise and rule There was sin, waiting in desire for him only one shade darker than quicksand sunken in haste, so as to mask all trace blood of Abel crying out from the land chasing tail in a cycle of blood and of grain bold and profane the mark of Cain expelled from all the glory of Eden sent forth n' far from the grace of God flesh o' his brother, fruits of th' field he built a city in the land of Nod industry of lust, engines of sin we begin wi' all fair favor spent sound n' fury, live n' love thy mis'ry daggers in the smiles of foe and of friend 'laws of human nature they won't ever change ne'er to be forgiven the mark of Cain the mark of Cain

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Date: 4/19/2015 4:26:00 AM
Such unique lines throughout!!! I loved this one : "only one shade darker than quicksand" ...wow! The mark of Cain.... you write the truth like a storyteller who has lived the experience over and over. " as the heavens fell he was as false as hell" That is also another profound line... Really enjoying your work posted. Thanks for sharing!!! Always, Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/22/2015 12:23:00 AM
Post it if you do! Abraham and Isaac... now that one would be tough. I'm sure you could handle it though. Keep up the amazing work...I am still reading your pieces on the page... would love to hear the music behind the words... ~Laura
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Rightly Jennings
Date: 4/21/2015 5:22:00 AM
Thanks again Laura. Judas might be a fun biblical character to write about. I had a look at Abraham and Isaac too but I can't handle it. God bless.
Date: 3/31/2015 9:09:00 AM
Really well written Paul, Enjoyed this piece. God bless Kevin
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Rightly Jennings
Date: 3/31/2015 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Kevin. There are a couple of lines in there from Ol' Shakespeare daggers in the smiles" and " sound n fury". Had a temporary job in an office, the translation work was easy, I said it was difficult, after a day it was finished. I then spent the rest of the fortnight looking for stories n characters I could put into a song, this was one result. Thug life.

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