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The Man With a Bad Toothache

There lived a man named Mcavity Who had a bad aching cavity He fell from outer space In a pool on his face And it was gone thanks to gravity!

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/30/2021 9:12:00 AM

Clever and witty Justin, very well penned, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Justin Abdool
Date: 4/30/2021 11:06:00 AM

Thanks, Jennifer. :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/5/2021 9:21:00 PM

I love your limericks, Justin. May I suggest Jack Ellison's limericks to you. Always be sure that the syllables in lines 1, 2, and 5 are the same; while the syllables in lines 3 and 4 are the same. It helps your limerick to flow nicely. Good job!

Justin Abdool
Date: 4/10/2021 7:35:00 AM

Thanks, Milton. And thanks for the advice. I will look into that. I really appreciate your comments and I'm very glad that you like my limericks. Have a great day!