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The Man Underneath

Was it a dream of a run towards The heavenly pleasure of my wants or Was it a sight of eternal freedom. I would ask you. It was a moment of truth you replied There was a smile and gratitude on my face For the reason you helped me. I desire the joy you got by helping me. I sailed the oceans and wandered the land I flew the air and enquired the trees The only answer I got was to make, “The Man Underneath”. “The Man Underneath” I wandered again, about that mysterious man. Who lay somewhere unknown to the wind and water And to the soil and light. It was never a surprise, Because he was, “The Man Underneath”. I was not contented and happy because, I never got my happiness and so did I decide to touch the horizon so far, I couldn't see it. I sailed and flew but never reached And then, he did tell me that, The horizon was like the way for the answer. I was confused and sleepy to continue my journey. A light fell on me saying that, I was imprisoned by the worldly pleasures, I had to break out of the prison And start walking with perception. I was enlightened and started my journey, To find the man underneath who was Sailing far and wide away from me. I never gave up and moved towards him. It was a matter of time when I found, That the inner self was “The Man Underneath”. And he was striving for eternal freedom. “The Man Underneath” was in me. Making me search for him far and wide To get the joy that I wanted and also, I would realise that I give freedom to, “The Man Underneath”.

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Date: 9/27/2016 3:01:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Jishnu. :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 2:48:00 PM
Jishnu, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/25/2016 1:28:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/23/2016 9:58:00 PM
Jishnu, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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