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The Man I Met When I Was Seventeen

He was a dark skinned man I couldn't tell his age He had a baby face But he also had a childlike heart He was thin, very thin, mostly bone His skeleton like figure scared many He never scared me I visited him a lot I loved listening to his stories and dreams Whenever I had no guests around, I was always in his room He had his own private room Whereas in my ward we had atleast ten females I never saw anyone visiting him I don't think he had family and friends He loved to laugh I wondered what brought him there We had big plans of opening the best restaurant in town At seventeen I knew I had a passion for food I loved to cook and entertain Besides my bedroom, kitchen was my next favourite room We talked of our passions and made big plans I left, I can't remember if I said my goodbyes or not Its been such a long time But I remember and treasure our moments He never left his room, he never even left his bed But his dreams took him places many wishes to see I left, he never did But the dream he put in me still lives on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/1/2015 6:15:00 AM
the light disappears when we stop dreaming am glad his dreams took him places and gave you the chance to soar. its wonderful how a kind deed can give hope, water dreams to life....give strength.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:25:00 PM
that's very true. I thank God for that and even thou it was a tough time in my life, I appreciate it now. I just wrote a poem titled "Let Me Jump" and ill be posting it sometime soon. thank you Marion
Date: 8/18/2015 7:59:00 AM
A wonderful story, very heartfelt and sad, I lost a few friends and they're still very close to my heart and thoughts they never leave you if they meant anything to you a 7 Hugs Eve
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:23:00 PM
thank you Eve
Date: 8/18/2015 7:57:00 AM
??* Happy Birthday to you ??•*¨*•.¸¸ ¸¸.•*¨*•?? Happy Birthday to you ??•*¨*•.¸¸ ¸¸.•*¨*•?? Happy Birthday Dear Njeri ??•*¨*•.¸¸ ¸¸.•*¨*•?? Happy Birthday To You ??•*¨*•.¸¸ Hope your day is filled with much love, laughter & fun surprises!!! ??•*¨*•.¸¸ And many blessings of wisdom, happiness, health, and a lot of wealth
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/20/2015 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Eve for the bday wishes. God bless
Date: 8/16/2015 10:38:00 PM
Strange how people come in and out of our lives. Nice write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:23:00 PM
very true, and when they leave they sometimes leave big impacts. thank you Mathew
Date: 8/16/2015 10:58:00 AM
A really moving write njeri. Sometimes all we have is a smile and our dreams, worth more than gold, like this poem. Kind regards, Ian
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:21:00 PM
thank you Ian
Date: 8/16/2015 8:56:00 AM
This is a vivid wonderful write. There are few to no words that can describe this experience, except coming from you. I thoroughly enjoyed and hope to read more like this from you...Thank you...
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:21:00 PM
aww.. thank you Judy

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