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The Maltese Moon, she draws my eyes to shapely orb in starlit sky she smiles at me with wanton grace and spills desire upon my face I'm all awash in milky glow sacred secrets Mine to know... the Maltese Breeze he flirts with me can't let me be his fingers trace my rounded face my hair he twirls my skirt's a whirl he has no care this Maltese Breeze alone can dare dishevel me and set me free The Maltese Sea now beckons me wets my desire in moon glow fire that rides the waves as my heart craves His liquid arms and all his charms This Maltese Sea so vast so free is calling me is calling me.... I close my eyes as Maltese Air caresses my lips in great fanfare I breath him in in sheer delight invigorated by his might I pause a while my life on hold.. my heart, it beats so brave, so bold The others, they just walk on by and yet I wait alone, I sigh Awash in light of Maltese Moon the Maltese Breeze just simply croons and Maltese Sea he, murmurs sweet and I am lost In Maltese treat The magic starts to fade away I start to walk, I cannot stay They've called me from my reverie I rush to catch up with the three but turn for one more blessed glance at Maltese Moonbeam's fond romance There's more to me than what they know more passion than what I can show The Maltese Moon, she smiles at me For we have shared sweet ecstasy Eileen Manassian

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Date: 8/6/2016 8:53:00 AM
There you go mooning us! I enjoyed reading this beauty once again. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/27/2016 3:48:00 PM
Rereading this beauty..and Heard your beautiful poem on youtube today..about bravery.Loved your little talk about people suffering with depression and the way We should show them sympathy..I need to show more to my dad.He sin hospital..Had a massive heart attack but tnks God He survived..Happy to see you.on ps Eileen..Pls dnt be stranger here.You re missed.
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Date: 7/22/2016 5:40:00 PM
Rereading this one. Miss seeing your writes. Have a blessed rest of your summer.
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Date: 5/9/2016 8:54:00 AM
Congrats, I see this is number 2 in the top 100. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. Always good to receive your praise. Hugs
Date: 5/1/2016 12:24:00 PM
This is a wonderful easy reading poem... Great job
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2016 12:32:00 AM
Thank you, Bonnie. The feelings I had on the evening were profound for me. It was hard to find the words to capture it. I'm glad you visited me today.
Date: 4/30/2016 7:39:00 PM
You obviously visited a place of great and rare beauty my friend, for it to leave such a deep mark upon you. I know of such things having found two rare, beautifully secluded spots in the deep woods.. A gem that I am adding to my fav list.A7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2016 12:33:00 AM
Thank you, dear Robert. Those days will never leave me...I'll carry them with me to my dying day. :) Thank you for your kind remark.
Date: 4/28/2016 11:09:00 AM
Wonderful write Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/28/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thanks, James. Much appreciated. :)
Date: 4/23/2016 11:07:00 PM
Hi Eileen! I am smiling as Paul directed me here from Facebook! No matter how one arrives, is always a pleasure so read such beautiful verse!!! Hugs!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/28/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for your visit to Malta! ;) I'm glad you could gaze at the beautiful Maltese moon right alongside me. Hope all is well, dear. Hugs
Date: 4/17/2016 10:33:00 AM
I see this in bluish gray like the Maltese cat. Color casts a charm over the whole piece for me and I like it very much. .A great mood poem.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/19/2016 1:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind and gracious visit. Your words are soothing to the soul. Blessings.
Date: 4/16/2016 10:36:00 AM
I have missed your poems so much !!!!! After reading this poem , I feel like flying to Malta... You have captured my mind and heart with this.... 7/7.. Hugs Red
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/19/2016 1:34:00 PM
It is a beautiful place, Red. Well worth the visit. I haven't been as active recently due to a few things. Hope I'll be able to come back soon. hugs
Date: 4/14/2016 7:54:00 AM
Excellent. A wonderful poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/19/2016 1:44:00 PM
Thank you, Ravi. I'm sorry it has taken me some time to respond. I haven't been feeling well. I'm grateful for your visit.
Date: 4/12/2016 2:58:00 PM
POTD!! Congratulations Eileen. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/19/2016 1:46:00 PM
Hugs, Rick. Hope you are enjoy picturesque Banff.
Date: 4/12/2016 8:41:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. dear friend Eileen - A really wonderful poem! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/19/2016 1:48:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. I'm sorry I haven't been around. Some things have been bothering me of late. Please don't think I'm ignoring you. I will be back...hopefully soon. Hugs
Date: 4/12/2016 3:18:00 AM
This was an excellent journey you took me on great piece
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/19/2016 1:46:00 PM
Thank you, Malcolm. I appreciate the visit. I'm sorry I didn't respond sooner or visit. I haven't been well. Blessings.
Date: 4/11/2016 11:14:00 PM
Very nice. Congrats for POTD. Wish u all the best.Keep it up.............with love.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/19/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on my poem, Manmath. I appreciate it.
Date: 4/11/2016 7:56:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on POTD. A well deserving write. Peace my friend:)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2016 10:15:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. I appreciate a repeat visit. Very kind of you, indeed.
Date: 4/11/2016 6:23:00 PM
A shared seduction need only know the sweet direction of lust touch glow, for the spirit of nature's passion is designed for your attention...the beauty and reverence of your poetry for natural, personal sensuality is divine Beloved Poetess. "Caresses my lips in great fanfare..." superb beauty...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2016 10:14:00 PM
Justin...your insight and input always bring delight to my heart. Thank you, Eagle. It was a superb moment for me. I truly felt as though the moon were speaking to me....assuring me that I am worthy, beautiful, and strong. I cannot fully express what went through my heart as I drank in the moment. I have read your latest, but the concepts were beyond me...Still it was beautiful.
Date: 4/11/2016 2:08:00 PM
Congrats on Potd...Hooray : )..Thanks Tps xxx Eileen deserves it : )
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2016 3:10:00 PM
Thanks, sweetie. I'm glad that your beautiful country got to share the spotlight with me today. I truly love it...and the people. Thanks for sharing this special moment with me. Hugs
Date: 4/11/2016 11:33:00 AM
wow, this is so nice, Eileen, and I appreciate your comment on my latest poem. It's so great to see you back!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2016 3:11:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. It's good to be back. Had a dry spell there for a while....Hugs
Date: 4/11/2016 11:30:00 AM
Back to offer my congratulations...hope this springboards your muse....hooray : )
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2016 3:12:00 PM
Thanks ever so much. I think it will. :) Thank you for sharing this moment with me.
Date: 4/11/2016 11:23:00 AM
Beautifully done Eileen, congratulations on POTD...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Very kind of you to pop by. Hugs
Date: 4/11/2016 10:08:00 AM
Yes I posted a couple on the 7th and one today. I have been commenting on some of your older writes but I guess you haven't been on the soup much.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2016 3:16:00 PM
I have been reading, but not commenting. I try to comment on all your writes, Richard. I don't want to miss any. I've been reading your comments and it has lifted my spirit. Thanks, dear. Hugs
Date: 4/11/2016 9:56:00 AM
Beautifully inspired sweetie, grats on poem of the day xx ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2016 9:58:00 AM
Thanks, dear. ;) This is one I could never horde! Read your blog. Very interesting. I haven't been much in the commenting mood of late. I wish you luck on your endeavors. Hugs
Date: 4/11/2016 9:39:00 AM
Congrats on being the "POTD" poet. ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2016 9:58:00 AM
Thanks, Moon Flower. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/11/2016 9:19:00 AM
You and the moon share a serene, peaceful and romantic moment together, Eileen, apart from sharing secrets. How lovely that the breeze, sea and air joined in to enrich an already enchanting sight! Yes, the moon was truly beautiful that night...I would not have wished you to miss it at any cost:) This must go to my favs! Hugs // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2016 10:26:00 AM
...and p.o.t.d. too, Eileen!! Congratulations:)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2016 10:03:00 AM
It was perfect in every way, Paul. It made me feel so good to be alive....so hopeful....so passionate....so determined.....so....happy. It was a beautiful night. One I will long remember. Of course, what was lovely also was knowing that on the morrow I would meet with you and Charmaine...my Maltese friends. Love you both so much. Thanks for your kindness to me and my family. Hugs
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