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The Makeover

Salons and beauticians carve beauty Today beauty and makeup are considered as duty What implies these beautiful faces? Reality and honesty in some cases Other hide ugliness and show they are fruity Is it fair or a cruelty? For ourselves a complete dishonesty As our beauty old age surely displaces Really? The Makeover To focus on eternal inner density And promise to step back from fake makeover's city. Soul proposes man dispossesses Let us oath to remove these twisted phrases I pray, a day may come of truth in majority Really? The Makeover

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Date: 2/19/2016 10:02:00 PM
Khyati tiwari, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 11:02:00 AM
:) SKAT
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Date: 12/20/2015 3:14:00 PM
K T, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Khyati Tiwari
Date: 12/25/2015 9:55:00 AM
Merry Christmas and a happy new year. may you travel your pictured path and take your success in your hand.
Date: 4/4/2015 8:09:00 PM
KHYATI, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:57:00 AM
What an excellent debut! Welcome to poetrysoup... Keep on writing..
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