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The Makeover

moonlit shadows springs eternal flame loves desire unquenched forever 3/ 4/ 2015. Haiku. Springtimes moon shadows dreams inspire. Eternal flight flames loves desire. Unquenched divine forever bright. Starlight enchants, beams with delight. 3/ 7/ 2015. Rhyme.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 4/19/2015 2:08:00 PM

Sorry that I am so late on the congrats, just recently found out the contest was finalized.. Big congrats on your win!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 5:36:00 PM

George, congratulations on your awesome win. Luv LINDA

Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2015 8:51:00 PM

How beautiful, they both are wonderful. Good luck in the contest, a7 blessings eve

George Seal
Date: 3/27/2015 1:41:00 PM

Hi Eve, thankyou for sending me your best wishes and i appreciate your nice comments about my poem. Cheers George.

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 3/9/2015 8:22:00 AM

George, I find haiku teaches condensation of thought; and yours delights me with soft warmth.

George Seal
Date: 3/9/2015 10:08:00 AM

Hi Iris,thankyou so much fot the beautiful take on the haiku.I do appreciate thoughtfulness.Cheers George.