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The Maiden of the Seas

Above waters of darkness and shadows, I float adrift Leaving behind anchored thoughts of screaming grief. On a man-made raft I set sails beyond the edge of a silver -blue reef. For the last time saluting my home-land An island of unforgiving time A speck of dust which harboured my solitude A bed-rock which cradled all despairs ,and each silent cry. I am a voyager,,a maiden with softest of skin,and tender feet But my stubborn soul is that of a wanderer A determined siren crossing foggy forbidden seas. Strong winds behind like white knights will help me to ride each tide of this darkling night 'Till burnt orange hues will rise above a faded horizon and Dawn's fire-ball reflects its warmth from a dirty-blue solacing sky. Guarding me from death's whistling- tunes The voice of youth and sea-shells will sing Protecting me from circling starved sharks that keep trying so hard to make my wooden barge sink. Alone I continue my journey ,far from the desert Distant from pirates that steal pure joy's treasures from unknown paths of life's labyrinth. How far will I go on?,As far as it takes... My heart is a compass ,it keeps showing all ways The ways to a shore with wide-open arms and a tropical sand Surrounded by calm serene ripples,awaiting to have my first dance.

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Date: 10/7/2017 2:34:00 PM
WOW! Very impressive. The amount and the quality of poetry you have written really speaks for itself. You are quite the poet.
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:34:00 PM
Charmaine Charmaine Charmaine. Words that come to mind are stunning gorgeous poetic reflective and more much more. Poetry incorporating the sea is always a winner with me and when done so beautifully as you have there are no words. It was once again an honor to turn to your page and read your top level talent. Well done entirely
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Date: 2/13/2017 6:45:00 AM
I could feel the longing and desire in this beautiful poem my sweet friend. there is something so enchanting and mysterious about the sea. Her journey seems long and tiresome but to land in his arms for that first dance is pure magic. An amazing poem dear Charmaine, I can tell this one came from a place deep in your heart.
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Date: 2/11/2017 6:09:00 PM
Dear Charma, you created the sense of a desperation to escape very powerfully in your poem. I like the way the maiden is determined to reach a friendly shore, in spite of the obstacles that work against her. I see the maiden in this poem as a metaphor for the desires in all of us to find love and happiness. It is mesmerizing! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2017 3:58:00 PM
Great poem Charmaine scary thoughts of sharks and drifting out to sea x well written x
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Date: 2/10/2017 9:16:00 PM
Lovely words that paint such vivid images. I really liked the silver blue reef, and the circling sharks. Well penned.
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Date: 2/10/2017 4:16:00 PM
Charmaine, first, excellence in poetry! Some of us were born to be vagabonds to our dreams. You have expressed it beautifully. I hope you find what you are looking for but I know it is an impossibility. Like Tim said, so many great lines, I liked, "softest of skin and tender feet"
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Date: 2/10/2017 11:03:00 AM
Love your sky description...TAH
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/10/2017 1:53:00 PM
Nice to see you back on Ps Tobey, Thanks.
Date: 2/10/2017 10:32:00 AM
A sad but beautiful poem full of hope...I love the heart is my compass image...some awesome lines and images...one of my favorites "But my stubborn soul is that of a wanderer A determined siren crossing foggy forbidden seas."...I can really feel this Charma...a 7 and fav
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/10/2017 1:56:00 PM
Thanks for the fave and 7 Tim, Im happy.
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Date: 2/10/2017 1:52:00 PM

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