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The Maiden

Sultry summer night, black and calm, quietness reigns except for soft lapping where water caresses the buoys waiting, waiting . . . thick clouds break and drift. Sudden light pulses on the ripples, the moon quivering in the river-mirror, shy of her reflection like a maiden unaware of beauty. Copyright, March 27, 2015

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Date: 3/21/2022 12:34:00 PM
Faye, I love the way you write. Giving the moon personification in this delightful poem. Congratulations on your top win in Brian’s contest. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/20/2022 5:15:00 AM
Moon... like a maiden unaware of her beauty - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/10/2015 12:50:00 AM
faye, Congratulations, on your win. ThanXs for supporting my MooN contest. GoodNight **SKAT**
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Date: 4/5/2015 4:39:00 PM
Absolutely divine, I am really enjoying reading your poetry this Easter Sunday. It is late afternoon, early evening depending on your perspective.
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Date: 3/27/2015 7:48:00 PM
such divine imagery Faye - a delight to read :-) a 7 from me:-)
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