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The Lover

. With a sparkle in his eyes and touch so ready with every move O so willing like you and i poets loving every word the lover loving every thrust loving every touch loving yes to please her and untiringly his ever loving self

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/4/2012 5:23:00 PM

"Tireless", now that is something to hold on to.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/19/2011 2:03:00 PM

airborne once again James.. so work on thngs tonite luv... or is it tonight already? haha,,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/19/2011 9:24:00 AM

Soup Mail sent the other day with both sets James.. let me know luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2011 1:14:00 PM

So glad u accepted James.. take a look at my "Ignition" poem and my "Pretty Poison" poem and see if u want to create something like this flow together..or if any other idea let me know luv.. I check into P.S. regularly even though away for another week ... take your time..no rush.. when u feel the flow of creativity ... just let me know luv.. am honored...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/11/2011 1:34:00 AM

What a very sensual piece and really like how you relate this with poetry as well, James :) thank you again for your very inspiring comments in my poem :) Super smiles for you :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/10/2011 5:17:00 PM

thankxx James .. everyone seems to think luv poetry is my forte' and it certainly is yours my friend.. what do u think about a collaboration poem on luv? it will be magnificent yes? let me know your ideas .. think about if luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2011 10:48:00 PM

a very loverly poem, James!! And thanks so much that you liked my footle! Luv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/9/2011 10:21:00 AM

okay, you just hafta to give some oxygen, james... i'm fainting here! one wrod: WOW! :) huggs, nette

Daver Austin

Date: 5/9/2011 8:36:00 AM

That's telling it like it is! I tell ya, Sir James, it is a two way struggle. Your unique short line approach is compelling, keeps one in suspense. Needless to say, you couldn't include the words in this masterpiece. I like this MUCHO! Love, daver

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/9/2011 7:52:00 AM

Lord, please bring me a lover like James! The power of your love is limitless. Thank you also for allowing me to share the "wave" poem. I will send it to a friend who will love it as much as I do. Glad you had a great week and I hope this coming week is the same for you, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/9/2011 6:09:00 AM

Dear James- Such a great comparison or analogy-full of emotion and love. Enjoyed your work. Gwedndolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/9/2011 4:15:00 AM

O lest I forget ... thought I had made u one of my fav poets... but today for sure luv.. bravo on your artistic gift.. praise God..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/9/2011 4:14:00 AM

James u have fashioned this write so well linking luv and poetry as one... the same kind of emotion my friend.. loving and writing.. two great inspirations.. an amazing work of art.. making it a new fav... thankxx for your insight on Trusting Teen .. all is good in God's Hands and even mistakes..appear to be blessings in all ways.. a child is so precious.. who could destroy? appreciate the luv.. my friend..