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Look again at your reflection in the mirror, and try to Open your heart to the truth I am going to whisper. Your Vision will clear to see what I behold when I look at you. Each time you smile I see into your heart beneath the long Lashes of your eyes. They waver from soft blue to deepest Indigo when I touch your ivory cheek. And when I kiss the Nape of your neck, you shiver. My love, not only with my Eyes do I admire the loveliness of you. I hear it in your soft Silken voice as you sing bedtime lullabies to our children. I Stand behind you at the mirror, gazing at my beautiful wife. :::...........:::...........:::...........:::...........:::...........:::...........:::

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Date: 2/16/2016 5:58:00 PM
you know, scenes like that are lovely, and sure this is an acrostic on loveliness....you've done this well, from the expression to the imagery...excellent you, though at first, i thougt those guys in your pic are two pair of married twins in opposite houses, staring at each other through the window and laughing out "why should you fix her...everytime i do so too?!" lol, best wishes for the contest
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/17/2016 5:18:00 AM
Your imagination sometimes goes into overdrive, no? lol Thanks, Sage.
Date: 2/15/2016 9:48:00 AM
like this I had a go and every line was a fresh sentence you have worked it into one piece impressive stephen :-)
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Date: 2/15/2016 9:58:00 AM
Thank you very much for your nice comments, Stephen.
Date: 2/13/2016 2:20:00 PM
I predict a winner Lin this is absolutely beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/13/2016 3:43:00 PM
You're so kind, Jan. Thank you for liking this one... hugs back to you.

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