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The Love Symphony- Quatern

THE LOVE SYMPHONY- Quatern Abab/caca/adad/eaeA The symphony of love is in rehearse, Come to me closely and hold my waist, Let us not make this time to curse, Tonight we'll lose our soul in haze. Hold your breath while we go deep, The symphony of love is in rehearse, The moment we can't help to keep. Perform it gently, care not to pierce. The symphony of love is in rehearse, Hear my moans break the silence. In depth of the ocean, do immerse. Let's hit the heaven's hidden surface. Hold me close 'til we reach the edge. While waiting for a sweet release, A solemn love we will both pledge, The symphony of love is in rehearse. written:May 01,2014 Especially dedicated to Andrea Dietrich's Do You Know Quatern Poetry Contest

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/5/2014 10:31:00 AM

Wow owls!! Love this sweet romantic symphony singing on my eyes and thoughts..:) God bless us always... Olive eloisa hugs much..:)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/5/2014 10:48:00 AM

hey gurl... aaaahhh... you're so sweet!!! :O)) tysm!!!! I hope mangyare na ang kitakitz natin so we can sing altogether 'til the break of dawn!!! ..haha... labyaH!!! ^__^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2014 10:23:00 AM

ohh wow.. i am awed by this beauty, aiyah!,, panalo.. huggs!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/5/2014 10:45:00 AM

OMG, nette... !!!! this is amazing... I didn't expect that my poem will amaze my poet highness... Thank you so much!!! .../;O)) my pleasure to have your comment.... I'm so happeeee!!!! .. :O))

Jack Ellison

Date: 5/5/2014 6:24:00 AM

This is absolutely beyond beautiful my sweet friend! Loving hugs, Jack XOXOX

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/5/2014 7:21:00 AM

Oooh... my ever sweetest and beloved, Jack.. Thanks for this wonderful comment!! oxox... :O))

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/4/2014 5:36:00 AM

It's like an unending waltz. thumbs up!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/5/2014 7:20:00 AM

whew!!! ...thanks JakE!!! oxox

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/4/2014 2:11:00 AM

"Hold me close 'til we reach the edge..." The best note of the symphony. Extremes feed most. J.A.B.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/5/2014 7:19:00 AM

hi JUSTIN!! .. tHANK you so much for a visit and comment on my poem... this is much appreciated!!! :O)) oxox

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/2/2014 8:46:00 AM

Practice does indeed make perfect. No music is more beautiful than the moaning of a woman in the heat of passion.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/5/2014 7:13:00 AM

Sorry for the late reply.. :O) Thank you ,Rick for such a rewarding comment you left on my poem!! ..:)0 oxox

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2014 7:23:00 AM

Very passionate work. Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/4/2014 4:51:00 AM

Thank yo so much,Sara :O))

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/1/2014 5:45:00 PM

Hi Aiyah, This was very elegant. Great write as always:~) Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us here. Peace, Deborah

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/2/2014 7:17:00 AM

Oh Deborah... you are so kind and sweet my dear friend!! :O)) Thanks for a wonderful comment!~~ ^__^OXOX

Tim Smith

Date: 5/1/2014 4:57:00 PM

So romantic. You did great...I tried one but couldn't finish it just wasn't right...hugs Tim

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/2/2014 7:15:00 AM

Hey Tim!! .. please finish your poem... I'm sure that'll be so lovely!! .. Thank you for commenting on my poem ..OXOX!! ^__^

Paul Callus

Date: 5/1/2014 4:56:00 PM

Lovely sensual symphony AiyaH. Quite an able performance!! // paul

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/2/2014 7:12:00 AM

Hey there ,Paul... Wazz up?!.. Oh my.. thank you for always leaving me smile.. I appreciate your kind comment all the time!!! .. :O))

Ken Carroll

Date: 5/1/2014 1:47:00 PM

Lovely poesia romantica!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/2/2014 7:11:00 AM

WOw!! Thanks Ken for a great reward on my poem!! ..:O)) Your visit and comment is much appreciated.. :O)) hugs...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/1/2014 1:38:00 PM

This is sensual and sweet, my dear. :) My kind of poetry. This is a difficult form. I haven't tried it. I've been busy lately. You haven't been by to visit. Hope all is well! Hugs

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 1:44:00 PM

you know what's the truth is... I am hesitate sometimes to leave a comment, I drop by and read... but your poem is so awesome that my comment may not be fitted.. hehe... Thanks again!! :O))

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 1:43:00 PM

Hi Sweet Eilee... aaahhh.. thank you dear!! ..yes this is kinda hard,, hehe,,, hope I made it right!! lol... Sorry if I can't visit your garden so often.. i just have limited time.. ^_^ OXOX..