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The Love Song

You are the yearn of my days Like the new air of my breath Sunshine greets through my morning As if I was slept under the bliss And if I had to leave from my certain place To be the other side where there is you I will catch every second of time Just only to stay whole with you I would say and sing it to the blue sky How's love flood through our kiss It made our world swirl and fly by Like a miracle of pendulum swing Days kept changing, unfolding But still I'm insist to be here Moon rose like too early Seemed it stayed to be apathetic And if I had to leave from my certain place To be the other side where there is you I will catch every second of time Just only to stay whole with you I would say and sing it to the blue sky How's love filled and made me full with you Immeasurable even by time For all I want is you And won't I take all those back again Though I'm suffered in pain Promised to be by your side For I know and I can see The same lonesome in you and me *inspired by Anne Currin contest "Song Lyric" Note: This is actually my old song lyric. I made a big modification and few changes of words in it regarding to the differences of language, but hopefully it still worth to be read :) enjoy!

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Date: 12/24/2013 2:01:00 AM
and a merry x-mass to you..PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/24/2013 2:03:00 AM
Thanks Linda :D hug, Yanny
Date: 11/20/2013 11:17:00 AM
Yanny, it was nice seeing you on my page... Thanks... Enjoyed the awesome flow of this blue song.... Have a nice day.. LINDA
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Date: 8/14/2013 10:10:00 AM
this is lovely Yanny, so lovely
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 9/4/2013 11:32:00 PM
Thanks harry, glad to see you around :D
Date: 8/7/2013 10:04:00 AM
- Excellent written my friend Yanny!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 9/4/2013 11:32:00 PM
Thanks anne! :D
Date: 8/7/2013 9:07:00 AM
Goodnight Sun Shine.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 8/7/2013 9:53:00 AM
Have a great day Rick :D
Date: 8/2/2013 3:48:00 PM
Hello Yanny, I miss your sunny visits. I hope all is well with you.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 8/7/2013 9:53:00 AM
Hehehe, all well here, I've got a visit by my hubby's big sister, nephew and his niece from England :D still busy with them lately :p
Date: 7/31/2013 11:41:00 AM
Yanny, very lovely and moving sentiment. Great expression :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 8/7/2013 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Karen :D glad to see you here Karen :D wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, yanny
Date: 7/26/2013 10:41:00 AM
Simply beautiful Yanny, a sunny morning treat for my eyes. I am happy I reread this morning. Check out my Ice King Poem, your Dark Prince has made an appearance.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 8/7/2013 9:49:00 AM
I'm really glad to know that you recheck this Rick, still I'm stuck in my muse hopefully I can catch up you soon, wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 7/17/2013 8:52:00 AM
I love it Yanny a truly special piece.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 7/17/2013 8:57:00 AM
Glad that you loved it Rick :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, Yanny
Date: 7/17/2013 6:41:00 AM
- Yanny, it's beautiful! - (Hope you find a melody to your love song.) - All good sent your way. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 7/17/2013 8:56:00 AM
I did, but in Indonesian version :D maybe I should make another new melody for this one,by the way this is my first English lyric song, I'm really excited about it :D wishing you a great day there Anne :D hug, Yanny

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