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The Love Scroll

I write to you, my darling love, emotions felt most tenderly; I read anew the words you wrote upon your latest scroll to me. I keep them all together, love, precious collection - all apart - outpourings of the dream we share from your dearest, purest heart. I wait for you and you alone, no other one will ever be as treasured as you always are, God's sweetest gift on earth to me. My world is quiet, seasons change; I write my heart upon the stars in hopes you read the messages in the midnight skies where you are. I pray that God will keep you safe upon your journey for our king; the day your ship sails into port will set cathedral bells to ring. But no bells will peal more loudly or with more melodious art than the bells that your returning will set to singing in my heart. Copyright, August 1, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 8/19/2014 9:38:00 AM
How romantic. Kudos to you! LoveLots, Ara
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Date: 8/17/2014 9:03:00 AM
We'll deserved win
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Date: 8/17/2014 6:55:00 AM
Oh....Faye...this is so beautiful...The bells...how I love the sound of bells and bells that bring good tidings are the best. You captivated with this. Congrats on your well deserved win, my dear. I loved it.
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Date: 8/17/2014 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations Faye this is lovely xx
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Date: 8/17/2014 12:20:00 AM
Congrats Faye on your top win...hugs Tim
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Date: 8/16/2014 8:04:00 PM
Beautiful poem and congratulations on your big win. God bless you and happy writing. With love & prayers, Gina
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Date: 8/16/2014 7:14:00 PM
A most beautiful write indeed. Congrats on your win, it's well deserved.
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Date: 8/16/2014 5:56:00 PM
Gee Faye, your meter is impeccable, and your words well chosen, Simply beautiful. Congratulation on your Win.
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Date: 8/16/2014 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations on a Wonderful win Faye. The sentiments in your poem sprinkle love as in a summer shower and it is warm and beautiful!
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Date: 8/16/2014 5:22:00 PM
As Ronnie Reagan famously said to Jimmy Carter: Therrre you go AGAIN! Another #1 spot! Fav line: 'I write my heart upon the stars'----WOW...
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Date: 8/16/2014 4:03:00 PM
Just imagine really getting a letter this wonderful..best I ever got was..loveyou honey...lol. congrats my dear. BG
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 8/16/2014 5:26:00 PM
She's some kinda poet isn't she BG? SO proud of her! (And you ain't so bad yourself ya know)
Date: 8/16/2014 2:15:00 PM
Love letters are amazing things. No wonder people keep stacks of them. So enjoyed these romantic musings. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/16/2014 2:09:00 PM
Way to go Faye. Congrats.
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:22:00 PM
And back again wid huge congrats on ur top winning awesome write Faye!
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:04:00 PM
Dropping bywith my congratulations Faye :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/16/2014 12:27:00 PM
Very skilled! So poetic. You found the perfect way to say everything, great rhymes, vivid pictures in my mind's eye. Can't say enough! Congrats!
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Date: 8/3/2014 6:59:00 AM
awesome!!! inspirational love letter
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:34:00 PM
This is truly, wonderfully rendered, Faye ! Although I'm in the scroll contest, too, I hope you win, for this is a worthy take on the painting. Love and light !
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Date: 8/2/2014 4:50:00 AM
Brilliant take Faye ! sure to place high,, good luck my friend!
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:21:00 AM
that was a good idea to make it a love letter on that scroll. It is really lovely! I just can't get into this challenge. Hope you score high with this gem.
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Date: 8/1/2014 9:26:00 PM
This is a great one my friend! It read like a calm float down a soothing cool river...on a very hot day..
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Date: 8/1/2014 1:13:00 PM
Very nice Faye, A romantic story for sure. BG
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Date: 8/1/2014 12:45:00 PM
Oh a beautiful romantic write. i do hope it does well in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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