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The Love Letter

Dear lover, and soulmate, and friend, How I hold you so close to my heart; If your love for me ever should end, My soul should refuse to take part. Should your mind overpower emotion, And you flood all my sunshine with rain; I'll still send you my truth, and devotion, While my love and best wishes remain. The flow of this pen be the truth, Like an elegant flow of the river; Though denied and rejected such youth, My heart is still sure to deliver. Our miserable love shall fill the distance, Our love has created two holes; Taken apart by social resistance, By those who deny our perfectly fit souls. Such love defined by separation, Without a touch to create a release; Finding my drive in but desperation, Though without you, my love shall not cease. Unless the blood in our hearts have to dry, And mold both our hearts into stone; My heart refraining such love, be a lie, For without you I shall die alone.

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  1. Date: 12/12/2011 11:04:00 PM
    Nice expression of love. I enjoyed reading this rhyming poem tonight. "How I hold you so close to my heart" This line touch my spirit and my soul. Thanks for sharing. Dalila

  1. Date: 12/11/2011 2:07:00 AM
    Well written with fine descriptiveness and rhyming. I am impressed with this offering.

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 8:46:00 AM
    Pure expression of love! This came straight from your heart! Thanks for sharing it;-)

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 10:45:00 PM
    Dana, , first things first~ How was your thanksgiving? I hope fine! About this poem: wow! very beautiful and deep.... love it.. and i also could not help notice the entertainment on the bottom... you go girl... have a nice one,...p.d.

    Smith Avatar Dana Smith
    Date: 12/6/2011 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My parents sent me away for Thanksgiving to stay with my aunt, I had a very nice time! Built bonfires and such! It was very relaxing. And yes, "Jesses Queen" is QUITE entertaining! Hahahah! Take care!!
  1. Date: 11/13/2011 9:27:00 PM
    YEP>>>GL w/that

    Queen Avatar Jesses Queen
    Date: 11/18/2011 9:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    but u tell him this got get his ass home!!!!!!!!!! and to call his brother now
    Queen Avatar Jesses Queen
    Date: 11/18/2011 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And Im not giving him a divorce but u are gonna wish u had never meant me..i promise u that..u need to go on with your small u have no idea what your getting into..nothing at all..u dont know what happend..all u know is what hes told u ..
    Queen Avatar Jesses Queen
    Date: 11/18/2011 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Is that what he told u i cheated on him i was married to him for friggin 9 yrs bitch u have no idea what transpired between us ..all hes telling u is what he thinks u need to hear your a little girl almost the same age as his little girl
    Queen Avatar Jesses Queen
    Date: 11/18/2011 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh really now i've never cheated on him bitch not once..and hes not getting a divorce and i know where's hes at right now and did u know that i can press charges against u in the court of law for interfering w/ my marriage and yes he does love me he told me on the phone your a pawn for him thats it your nothing but a pawn to try and fill his empty heart that u have no idea to fill but i know where he at right now..and I'm telling u what i'm gonna blow the lid off of everthing..
    Smith Avatar Dana Smith
    Date: 11/14/2011 5:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are CRAZY! This is my only safe place, please leave me alone! He doesn't love you, and he wants a divorce! Not because he's a bad guy, but because YOU CHEATED on him! If you really loved him you would let him be happy! And he is NOT going to be happy with you!
  1. Date: 11/10/2011 5:57:00 AM
    I have enjoyed reading your poetry and wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Dana'lynn. May inspiration come into your soul each and every day. I will stop in at the Soup and see how you are doing from time to time. Love and best wishes always, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 9:33:00 PM
    Oh my!That is beautiful!..Thank you for the comments :-) I will be back here to read more,you can count on it! It's a bit late at the moment. :-) Till then..

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 4:23:00 PM
    Beautiful love letter that shows the essence of true the line, 'My soul should refuse to take part'. Great job!

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 4:04:00 PM
    * “Tis A Very Beautiful Loves Letter * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Dana'lynn * Truth Be Found Amid Its Wonderfully Brushed Colours * Blessed Is The Heart Whom Shares The Beautiful Bed of Pure Love * I Am Going to Fave Your Splendours As A Poetess * Along With This Masterpiece In Beauty * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *