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The Love Dare

When no longer.................................................In Love, you feel in...............................................Addition To this problem.................................................To Hurt, to start.....................................................Saying Negative things.. instead, say.............................Nothing Bad or really .....................................................Negative But say only good..............................................To Your former love................................................Your Love of old, your................................................Spouse Say, say............................................................Again I admire you......................................................Today For the little things thay you.................................Do For me, acts.......................................................At Extra cost to you, show me that you care, at .......Least Some for me and my well being, at least...............One Act you do everyday...........................................Unexpected Acts that are a ...................................................Gesture Of your concern..................................................As You go about......................................................An Ordinary day, one...............................................Act Just one act........................................................Of Love will reciprocate.............................................Kindness (End line is from a book titled "Love Dare"...Try the love dare in your marriage and see what happens and write it down...For a woman say to a man I admire____________..For a man say to the woman I appreciate___________....Also do one thing extra for that person that they don't expect you to do...See if this starts a snowball effect of love and kindness at your house....This will not work in all situations but most..)

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Date: 4/30/2010 8:46:00 AM
interesting setup, good job!
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Date: 4/12/2010 10:36:00 PM
"If Only" we all know that neither, or at least only one out of the two would do such a thing. but then there are those people who feel a much deeper passion in love and have faith & believe in your words, Sara. that would be so sweet. -Always&Forever Linetsuto(lol)
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Date: 4/12/2010 6:51:00 PM
very very nice you did a great job with this well done loved it and thank you for all your comments and support faleshia
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Date: 4/12/2010 9:22:00 AM
Very nice message Sara and extremely important too.. good use of end line word ... enjoyed ..thankxx for sharing..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/12/2010 8:43:00 AM
that was so well done
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Date: 4/12/2010 5:51:00 AM
good idea, it usually works for me and wayne...usually. We both strive to not say hurtful things to one another.
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Date: 4/12/2010 5:36:00 AM
This is truly interestng. I like reading both sides of the poem separately and the messages are clear. Good poem.
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