The Love Bird

It’s in your hand, touching the palm. Joyfully chirping, peaceful and calm. If you try to hold on, the bird will fly away. Just let it be free, and it’ll stay someday.

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Date: 10/25/2009 1:31:00 PM

Interesting perspective. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Elaine George

Date: 10/23/2009 11:26:00 AM

Dear Roderick, Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry this week. Lainie

Ld King

Date: 10/19/2009 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations to you Roderick on your poem being featured this week You've finally gained the recognition that you probably didn't seek If you're like me you wrote your poem because your heart had something to say You thanked us for reading by writing good words, accept thanks in return today

James Fraser

Date: 10/19/2009 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/18/2009 5:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Roderick. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/30/2009 5:43:00 PM

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