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The Love Affair

The old lady with white hair slowly tottles out onto the porch in the cold damp air. She pulls the rocker back away from the dampest part of the porch and sits listening to the sounds of nature. constant straight down rain pouring out of solid gray clouds... bird in oak warbles As the continuous rain trickles from the roof and the gentle breeze stirs the wind chimes to play tunes, a bird warbles chere', chere' to a lady friend who answers cheer. The rain is cold and uninviting to humans but birds must ignore such a small inconvenience to love affairs and courtship. Their chirps to each other get closer. One has moved into the Holly Bush about ten feet closer to the one bird in the Pear Tree. a gentle breeze blows touches silent chimes still pipes... a love affair born The gentle breeze blows cold mist from the rain upon the old lady in the rocker out on the porch. She shivers and writes a few more words in her notebook before retreating into the warm, dry and comfortable home. She thanks God for a few minutes to enjoy the creation and the creator.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/30/2014 10:43:00 PM
I see you are still working with this Haibun! This is probably your best version so far! I like how you include yourself within your poem, that is a pleasant twist! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a fantastic piece! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/30/2014 7:28:00 PM
Just A Note: Your More Than Welcome Sara! It Was A Pleasure To View Your Beautiful Words....Keep Brushing And Have A Wonderful Evening, Jeremy
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Date: 3/30/2014 3:33:00 PM
- Lovely done in Haibun form, Sara !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/30/2014 3:17:00 PM
I Truly Enjoyed This Wonderful Verse. Picturesque And We Do Shall We Be Blessed; To Arrive At A Place Whence One Is Older...Appreciating, Living A Simple Life Untangled Whileas Gazing Ahead....Out With The Old In With The New Her Rat Race Is Done; The Old Man's Chew ? Glad To Have Found Your Lovely Poem! Yours Truly, Jeremy
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