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The Lost Years

They started married life so much in love and such eager expectations. The future was theirs to live with verve, while tasting of the world's treasures. But then the secrecies began along with raging words of anger. The days all ran together as time closed the empty pages. Gone is the sweetness of the past and gone as well her ardent lover. She huddles in a darkened room, hoping she won't be discovered. He's quiet now, she rises to bathe her swollen eyes. He'll awaken of course to say he's sorry but she's heard it too often before. Their happiness in the past, was perhaps only a wishful mirage. Her love has turned to pain and fear that can't be borne forever. Swiftly she packs an overnight to slip away while he's still sleeping. This time for sure she tells herself, she won't go back again. For John's "Jaded Love" contest

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Date: 12/1/2010 5:34:00 PM
Great work that is emotive and expressive about a sad topic...Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2010 3:39:00 PM
Nicely written Joyce. Jaded love can be so hurtful. Good luck in John's contest. Joe
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:20:00 AM
We are having our first laying snowfall this morning in Springfield,Ohio. December 1,2010 what a way to enter this month. It is absolutely beautiful and finds me in good spirits. I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Joyce. Looking forward to reading more. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2010 5:14:00 PM
Very creative Joyce and a great entry for John's contest... good luck my friend.. my entry is "Pierced by Pain"... speaking from experience once again.. amazing write ..with luv..
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Date: 11/30/2010 5:00:00 PM
sounds like a rough life to lead....good write for the contest!!
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Date: 11/30/2010 11:17:00 AM
liberating! your pen wields powerful strokes, joyce.. best of luck in the contest.. warmest, nette
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Date: 11/30/2010 10:41:00 AM
It takes courage to break free from an abusive relationship, Joyce. Wilma works at a place that offers counseling for abused women and I wish there were more such facilities. You have touched on a problem that impacts far too many women, Joyce. A compelling poem that will surely rank high in John's contest. Wishing you success with this incredible poem. One for my faves. Love, Carolyn
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