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The Lost Life

The sound of the bass Triggered the noise Just minutes to sunset Music filled the streets Paving the crowd He stood beside me Far away from the stage He looked calm and discreet Tired by the responsibilities And the monotony of his work For him, stardom's heaven Loved and respected, Envied by men, And greeted by schmoes A life he wished for But love, his nemesis Washed away his zeal Took him far down To a place From where there was no escape He stood numb, locked in dreams He wished to stay there With the noise at its peak I watched my son Lost in his world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/10/2015 10:59:00 PM
Hi Akhil, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2015 10:59:00 PM
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Date: 12/20/2014 3:26:00 PM
AKHIL, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/20/2014 8:17:00 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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