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The Lost Dance

Hi Morning I miss you In the dawn dew Hair braided in two long braids drawn forward In bright cotton frocks with warm smile in eyes Slice of pure sky Cynosure At home In School A gem Now dry leaves All crease and scars The mirror asks where are gone all those dawns _______________________________________________________ July 16, 2016 For the Contest Triple Tetractys 2 hosted by Eve Roper Syllable Count: 1-2-3-4-10/10-4-3-2-1/1-2-3-4-10 as per www.howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 7/22/2016 9:16:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Probir, you paint a picture of passing time beautifully. Congrats on your win. ~karam~
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/23/2016 1:37:00 AM
Thank you Karam ...
Date: 7/22/2016 5:50:00 PM
REally nice and a thoughtful write, Probir. Congrats for the win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/23/2016 1:39:00 AM
Thank you Andrea .... Congratulations on your win too ...
Date: 7/16/2016 4:46:00 PM
Very beautiful Probir, the words flow off the tongue like a sweet melody!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/16/2016 9:44:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/16/2016 3:18:00 PM
what joy you bring through this enchanting piece, probir..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/16/2016 9:45:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/16/2016 11:14:00 AM
Excellent. Good luck in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/16/2016 9:46:00 PM
Thank you ...

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