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The Loss of the Rose

The rose has been raped of her beauty Stolen by hordes of dreary lines And to be leached further still Until nothing remains of her But yellowing birthday cards And sugar-free quotes, in italics Like a rose is like nothing at all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/13/2014 10:45:00 AM
This is good, Jeremy. LoveLots, Ara
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Date: 4/20/2013 11:14:00 AM
yellow roses are my favourite..I do agree..that the rose was stolen from all that she owes but as in the ending..a rose is always a rose..beautiful lines Jeremy
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Date: 4/7/2013 4:02:00 PM
well said with echoes of Gertrude Stien ...a rose, is a rose, is a rose...
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/18/2013 7:53:00 AM
Yes! It does, indeed. Thanks for stopping by :)
Date: 4/7/2013 11:53:00 AM
Jeremy, this is just an awesome write. Hope you are having a great weekend :) Wilma
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Date: 4/7/2013 1:19:00 PM
I am! Hope you are, too. Thanks :)
Date: 4/7/2013 9:43:00 AM
So true some images have become so overused they are almost repulsive, nice to see how the rose might feel if it had a voice & I felt you mean a beautiful woman too for some reason? Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
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Date: 4/7/2013 1:19:00 PM
I'm glad the poem came through to you so clearly, Debbie. Thanks for dropping by
Date: 4/7/2013 9:29:00 AM
Jeremy this is terrific ....David
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Date: 4/7/2013 1:18:00 PM
Very very much appreciated, David
Date: 4/6/2013 4:42:00 PM
I think it deserves a FAVE
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/7/2013 1:18:00 PM
;) !
Date: 4/6/2013 4:41:00 PM
wow, what a deep thought in this succinct poem. LOVE it!!!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/7/2013 1:18:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 4/6/2013 11:11:00 AM
A Rose - one of the most beautiful flowers. It is so delicate. That is why it is protected by thorns. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Date: 4/7/2013 1:17:00 PM
Thanks, Lucilla, for stopping by
Date: 4/5/2013 9:04:00 PM
Oh Whoa, so sad, and very very beautifully described. Got a 7>>>>>> keep writing, you also write from the heart. Love xoxo Terry
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/6/2013 7:19:00 AM
Thank you so much

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